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Lisa_bebe15
Member

since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2002-03-04 12:35 PM

Love can come into your life
like a speeding bullet
and shatter your heart
into millions of peices on the floor.
which cannot be fixed

Love is like a jigsaw puzzle that has many peices
people give up on that puzzle
until one day,
you realize you didnt finish that puzzle.
when it is finished,
it makes a wonderful picture
that tells a story.
just like love

Love is like grass,
after you cut it,
it always grows back.
But when the roots are pulled
the grass can be replanted.
grass can die and never regrow
just like love

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I dont like this poem, but someone told me to just post it..anyone else not like it? I was going to put it up on the teen board, but I didnt think it has naything to do with teens. So I put it here..what do YOU think?

"Water Over Matter"

Masked Intruder

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

1 posted 2002-03-04 12:49 PM

Are you looking for a simple yes/no response? Or do you want me to go into detail?

LOL

If it's the former, then yes, but...

If it's the latter, let me know and I'll finish that sentence.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-03-04 02:15 PM

Hey girly,

Well I liked it

I liked the metaphors you used to describe the ways of love.
Good Poem.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-04 06:07 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...how could anyone not like this beautiful piece? I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggsssss) I think these are wonderful, lovely metaphors of love, sweet friend, may sunshine forever shine in your heart and may the grass of your heart forever glow as green as an emerald with rich pur elove! (kis son cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lisa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2002-03-04 07:28 PM

thank you for posting it

enjoy your read

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