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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-03-04 11:27 AM



Sargents step surreal summits
smoke sneaks,spoils speak
spook sports select shroud
striking secret seance
sundry sullen soldier stance
stalks, stakes, stuffs
sumptuous silver sinuous settee
skeletal shadow sees
seventh stroke steals
stinking skunk squeals.



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-04-2002 11:35 PM).]

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strbbux
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1 posted 2002-03-04 11:33 AM


Ecrivan this is good. good job. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-03-04 11:42 AM


Have modified it to fit the seen where soldier meets his destiny at a game of chess,
thanks Floria


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