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Take My Hand
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Take My Hand |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Take My Hand When you hear the breeze whisper gently in your ear I'll lead your mind to peace as I chase away your fear. When you feel the gentle rain touch soft upon your skin as your soul lets go of pain I'll help you find the light within. When you see the morning sun I'll be there to brighten up your day do not doubt I will be the one to keep your skies from turning gray. When you taste the sorrow of life I will walk with you upon the sand let me share the burden of your strife all you need do~ is take my hand. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I love these beautiful words with beautiful feelings. floria Floria |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When you feel the gentle rain touch soft upon your skin as your soul lets go of pain I'll help you find the light within. =================================== your rhymes live up to your pen name dear poetess, this is cadence kissed tenderness... and sweetly soft in its sincerety. Beautiful Donna.  So it seems your saving grace was only saving face, you thought he was wanting you... but he was only wanting you to let him off the hook. ~BNL~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (03-04-2002 12:34 PM).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I would take your hand anytime, anywhere, my friend. Lovely thoughts here... jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, you are so sweet, dearest friend, and I always have ahand out for you whenever you need someone to talk to and wash your tears away with hope and faith! (kis son cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Tender and beautiful. *S* I like this very much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit, A very nice write, enjoyed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you Floria. Glad that you enjoyed. Janet thank you always for such sweet replies. I just write the way I feel.....lol....sometimes that might not be such a good thing.....but hey, at least I'm writing. Jimmy, as I would extend it too dear friend....Hugs to you. Thank you Noah, your offer is much appreciated. You are a sweetie. Hugs. Vandana, thanks for reading. Suthern, glad you enjoyed, it makes me smile. Sey, thanks for kind words. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Simple enough, taking a hand...whether it be of child, the aged, or the inbetween...a touch is sometimes all that matters... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I offer my hand outstretched awaiting your grip let us take a walk Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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