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Duncan
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0 posted 2002-03-04 01:46 AM




How is it
that I even enjoy missing you

How is it
that you have redefined the parade
for lesser moments

How is it
that you feel the same way

© Copyright 2002 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2002-03-04 01:50 AM


Duncan,
Rhetorical...right?

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2002-03-04 07:07 AM


"How is it
that I even enjoy missing you"

So few words, and yet ... you've captured this emotion perfectly. Excellent Duncan!

Best wishes,
/Kit

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-03-04 07:09 AM


How is it that you are both so lucky? *s

You don't have to answer.

M

Krissy
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4 posted 2002-03-04 07:39 AM


Duncan Hi there in so few words you’ve really captured the true depth of love.

Wonderful writing you’ve given me such a warm glow


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-03-04 07:45 AM


Duncan,
Very good, right on. Enjoyed

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2002-03-04 08:40 AM


How is it
that you have redefined the parade
for lesser moments
=============================


*smiling at you*

ummmm Duncan...didnt you know...Less is more.
ROFL
Oh and Duncan...about your last line?
how could she not?  *S*

you not only take succinctity to new heights...but heart on sleeve as well...
(and, you wear it well)

So it seems your saving grace was only saving face,
you thought he was wanting you...
but he was only wanting you to let him off the hook.

~BNL~

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-03-04 09:03 AM


...Perfect!!...

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

rosepetals25
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8 posted 2002-03-04 09:16 AM


Duncan,

   I swear you read my mind.  It's starting to get a little scary.. lol. I love this

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Marsha
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9 posted 2002-03-04 09:38 AM


Duncan darling boy, you know exactly what I’m going to say about this it’s spectacular. TRULY PERFECTION, never has this been said better. I know this well. You are an amazing writer of feeling

Fabulous writing darling utterly utterly fabulous


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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10 posted 2002-03-04 10:32 AM


Love will do that..I know the feeling. Now the miracle of it is that you have found someone who feels the same.
Sandra

ctowen
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11 posted 2002-03-04 10:54 AM


Well captured yes ....
but even better shared.

Excellent!

create an addiction .... share a smile!!

A Whisper's Caress
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12 posted 2002-03-04 11:30 AM


How is it
that you have redefined the parade
for lesser moments
sigh.....
I have missed the works here.

strbbux
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13 posted 2002-03-04 11:32 AM


Dear Duncan, How is it----- that you write so beautifully. well done, love this, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

walker
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14 posted 2002-03-04 07:09 PM


You've fallen and you can't get up That's 100% love
Ladyhawke
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15 posted 2002-03-04 07:16 PM


Sweet in cerebral simplicity. Excellent.
vandana
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16 posted 2002-03-04 07:24 PM


enjoyed
Mistletoe Angel
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17 posted 2002-03-04 07:55 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwww, this is soooo wonderfully simple, sweet friend, your words always touch my heart! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA
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with you
18 posted 2002-03-04 09:30 PM


Cowboy
how is it you know how to touch
with so few words?!

Tracey
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19 posted 2002-03-04 10:06 PM


How is it that you captured my heart, when it wasn’t looking for love? How is it that reading these words makes me feel all warm and fuzzy (or is that from 3 nights of drinkin in N’awlins??? Lol) Missed you too darlin.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

jwesley
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20 posted 2002-03-04 10:56 PM


Yep!  Recognize that vacant stare, my friend...lol!  Very well done, perceptive write.

jwesley

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