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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2002-03-04 12:19 PM



Children

Are beautiful
They cheer you up with smiles
Faces covered with wonder

Are wonderful
They smile even when in pain
Faces gleaming with laughter

Are priceless
They make friends of all walks
Faces blind of colour

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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ecrivan
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1 posted 2002-03-04 01:29 AM


children are wonderful, and it's wonderful to experience their openess


Krissy
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kent England
2 posted 2002-03-04 08:08 AM


Daniel hi there, I like this one it’s such a joy to read. Amazing how you’ve packed such a lot into so few words

Very well written


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Sven
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3 posted 2002-03-04 02:16 PM


and they tell adults to stop acting like children sometimes. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

RosePetal
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4 posted 2002-03-04 02:18 PM


Children are so very precious, I can't wait to be a mother some day!! Good write Daniel
(hugs)

RP

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