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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-03-03 07:28 PM

Twinight

How can I leave you…
I have watched o’er you this day
Saw the smiling laughter glitter
Golden in the touch of hand
To child’s hair,

Glimpsed upon an eye, spying
Curve of hip, not slender
Yesterday’s form but the
Soft flow of tomorrows
Yet to come

Saw a hand stroking a sleeve,
Enjoying yet again the
Story of one hundred
Hearings and more, waiting
For the chuckle at the end

I saw a dream lay down
In the grass, eyes skyward,
Hope floating
On plans of future success
All within a grasp of get

I saw a bend of waist
Over toys and remnants,
Hurrying, scurrying toward
That rush of wait, wait
Today’s almost gone…

And then I left you with
Hope’s rainbow along your horizon,
Hoping tomorrow will see you
Mirroring me
With your radiance again…

~*~

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
3 March 2002

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-07-2002 12:17 PM).]

Nan

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2002-03-03 07:30 PM

Each one more resplendent than the last.. just like your wondrous poetry...

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2002-03-03 07:33 PM

Karilea--

I glimsed the smile of you
in this piece of a poem you drew
love, yet an ache touched me too
was it mine or was it yours?

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-03 07:38 PM

"And then I left you with
Hope’s rainbow along your horizon,
Hoping tomorrow will see you
Mirroring me
With your radiance again…"

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such romance fills these words along with a tinge of sadness of trying to hang onto this hope like the rainbow after a storm! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Lia Fail
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since 2002-02-26

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4 posted 2002-03-03 07:44 PM

simply beautiful.
Lia

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-03-03 08:00 PM

Beautiful Karilea and the picture is spectacular!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-03-03 09:25 PM

This was so peaceful in many ways...and the
pic...certainly added to the message...Very
nice Karilea...

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2002-03-03 09:51 PM

Beautiful again, my friend...smiling here...

jwesley

Alwye

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In the space between moments

8 posted 2002-03-03 09:54 PM

Wow....this is incredibly gorgeous....I am so impressed.

Magnificent writing!

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

9 posted 2002-03-03 10:42 PM

Kari darling sister of my heart, girl this is simply outstanding writing, you have done so well here I don’t know how you do it. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. YOU always write brilliantly and today is no exception.

Wonderful flow and rhythm this is fabulous and the pic is spectacular, I love sunsets, almost as much as I love dawns. Truly darling girl this is awesome

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25

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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

10 posted 2002-03-03 10:45 PM

tis is a splendid piece of work-I almost can relate it to my girls and my wife at the same time. hmmm do I need a psychologist?

Krissy
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since 2002-02-22

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kent England

11 posted 2002-03-04 08:04 AM

Autie Kari hi there, this is so very pretty, you’ve painted such a beautiful picture. I could hear my mum saying the same things, but you said it better

I really do like this it’s a lovely piece from you and the picture is delightful. I really do like this one

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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12 posted 2002-03-04 08:51 AM

How can I leave you?
I have watched o'er you this day
Saw the smiling laughter glitter
Golden in the touch of hand
To child's hair,

==================================
And then I left you with
Hope's rainbow along your horizon,
Hoping tomorrow will see you
Mirroring me
With your radiance again
===================================

You live up to thy pen name with this dear Sun ...
radiance is a good word...yes.....a very good word.
Remember your sunglasses when mirroring, wouldnt want you blinded by your own light

So it seems your saving grace was only saving face,
you thought he was wanting you...
but he was only wanting you to let him off the hook.

~BNL~

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2002-03-04 10:47 AM

OH sunshine.....WOW this is simply amazing.....

And then I left you with
Hope’s rainbow along your horizon,
Hoping tomorrow will see you
Mirroring me
With your radiance again"

this left me with such a peace....

Beautiful~

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

14 posted 2002-03-04 11:08 AM

How can I leave you…
I have watched o’er you this day
Saw the smiling laughter glitter
Golden in the touch of hand
To child’s hair,

Glimpsed upon an eye, spying
Curve of hip, not slender
Yesterday’s form but the
Soft flow of tomorrows
Yet to come
says so much my friend....

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

15 posted 2002-03-04 11:37 AM

Karilea from deep within the soul this came. lovely. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

16 posted 2002-03-04 01:19 PM

Yowser!!! *S* This is beautiful, this is excellent... I was almost surprised at the superb personification... and then I remembered your name. *S* Flawless!

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

17 posted 2002-03-04 02:01 PM

teach you. . .

well, I would think that, from reading this. . . it is you that is teaching us. . .

amazing my friend. . .

------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

18 posted 2002-03-04 03:12 PM

Wonderful....and eloquent.
And as Sven pointed ...You are the one who would teach us.

thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

19 posted 2002-03-04 03:55 PM

You are so good at this

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

20 posted 2002-03-05 03:07 AM

But you DO give me a rainbow everyday, and for that I am grateful. (sheesh look at the size of that beautiful picture will you? LOL, so there!) My but that was Sundiferious!

~* If I made you "feel" anything at all today, that makes me smile *~
~*~Mysteria ~*~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

21 posted 2002-03-05 06:13 AM

stunningly beautiful....and peaceful. thank you for this one Karilea, into the treasure box it goes.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

22 posted 2002-03-06 02:22 AM

Sunshine--

Yup! This is what I meant about the treasure chest of talent. Loved the picture!

Wish that some moments would never end. Like beautiful sunsets.

Thanks for sharing!
Shenachie

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

23 posted 2002-03-06 06:58 AM

beautiful picture and touching words, Karilea

very wistful.*s

M

GenXer
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24 posted 2002-03-06 06:10 PM

Karilea - Beautiful write. Enjoyed.

Dave

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

25 posted 2002-03-06 11:18 PM

You folks are simply amazing, and if this horrendous headache would allow me to thank you all individually, I would...but it won't, at least, not now...

so thank you everyone...you are all very, very special people to me, and Passions is the epitome of poetry and gracious websites...

and this little gem may be entered in a poetry contest...

wish me luck...

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

26 posted 2002-03-07 12:03 PM

good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! good luck! If the judges can read, this should win. *S*

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

27 posted 2002-03-07 12:06 PM

And with this you certaintly are Ms. Sunshine!

Everything about this is wonderful! The picture you use and the words you paint are beautiful!
Now it's my turn to say IWIHWT!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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