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0 posted 2002-03-03 07:07 PM




The good guys don’t always win…
Especially when shadows ink black
Flow into corners tucked
Tightly under covers
Smothered hot… heart pounding
Monsters that steal one’s life
Even at 48.




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1 posted 2002-03-03 07:13 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) This is so very sad but true, sweet friend, sometimes life can be so cruel and selfish people can ruin others lives. I think for example in William Shakespeare's Othello, where Iago brainwashed the good guy Othello with jealousy and how that lead him to kill his wife and having Iago stand as a heroic antagonist. (sad sigh) This is very powerfully emotional, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Contabo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!'

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-03 07:14 PM


Indeed - Words of wisdom here..
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3 posted 2002-03-03 07:16 PM


contabo - succinct lines well crafted.... welcome
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4 posted 2002-03-03 08:51 PM


I thank all of you for replying...

Remember children can scar easily.

Contabo

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