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janmew
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0 posted 2002-03-03 12:54 PM



If I found a fairy, afloat upon the breeze
and if one wish was all that she could offer me,
I’d know without a thought the wish that I would make
would be to have you here so your hand I could take.

If I found an ancient lamp; set the genie free,
and in her gratitude one wish she granted me,
I would not wait to ask to have you by my side
where the love in my eyes would never have to hide.

If there was a witch who could cast a magic spell
to fill my heart’s desire, which she’d know very well,
‘twould be to taste your lips in love’s sweet tender kiss
and hold you in my arms awash in lover’s bliss.

But if there was a gypsy peddling her wares,
she could keep her potions and sell them at the fairs,
for I already love you, and you love me too;
no potion in the world could make our love more true.

© Copyright 2002 Jan - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-03-03 12:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe the best love potion of all is what lies in the heart, with faithfulness and devotion to another! (kiss on cheek) May you fall in love with him all over again everyday, sweet friedn, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-03-2002 12:59 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-03-03 06:17 PM


Nice poem, and I followed along to the end, and found you don't need the potion. How wonderful. Could you send it to me, if you find it?
Sandra

Lia Fail
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3 posted 2002-03-03 06:51 PM


This was right up my alley fairies, genies , witches...loved it.
Lia                     

Nan
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4 posted 2002-03-03 07:39 PM


What a sweet love story... I'm smiling..
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