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janmew
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0 posted 2002-03-03 12:45 PM


Close your eyes my darling
and listen to the balladeer;
imagine I am with you
and you can hold me near.

He might sing a hurtin’ song
of struggles and hardship
he might tell the tragic story
of a long since sunken ship.

Next might be a travelin’ song
perhaps a history or two;
and he has found many ways
of singing “I Love You”

Whatever he is singing
has the same effect on me
I feel like I am close to you
when I hear him sing, you see.

I know that were I with you
while we listened to each song
I would hold your hand my dear
as I softly sang along.

So Darling close your eyes,
when you hear the balladeer
and I'll be right there with you
and you can hold me near.

[This message has been edited by janmew (03-03-2002 12:49 PM).]

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strbbux
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1 posted 2002-03-03 12:47 PM


Oh I love this Jan, I have heard much beautiful music coming from the baladeer lately, and this is a great tribute. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

janmew
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2 posted 2002-03-03 12:51 PM


Ummm.... to clear up any missinderstandings, this is not about the person here who uses the ID Balladeer.     I just noticed that was a user on here. Oops. The actual balladeer referred to in this piece is Gordon Lightfoot... a favourite singer of my Love and I.

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3 posted 2002-03-03 01:05 PM




(smiles) Oooohhhhhh... I love Gordon Lightfoot's music too, this is sooooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) My favorite songs are his travelling ones, they always make me feel like singing along with him and I envision the journies in my head as he sings his lyrics! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-03 02:49 PM


hehehe funny.. it would fit in either interpretation, as both artists are astoundingly good at what they do, and the stories of love they tell

God alone is alone. Man is not.

amusemi
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5 posted 2002-03-03 03:08 PM


Really neat write there!!
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6 posted 2002-03-03 04:46 PM



Oft'times come the poet
or the poetess
who would in recollect
praise the very best

how many stories
have we seen?
how many moons
cast their beams?

how many times
how many more
will Balladeer
seek Passion's door?

How many times?
it matters not!
as long as his poetry
is not forgot...

Well done Janmew!

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7 posted 2002-03-03 04:55 PM


Jan this is an excellent piece from you. I’m sure that this could equally reflect the talent and the wonder that this tribute brings to mind. I don’t know Mr. Gordon Lightfoot’s work but if he’s anywhere near half as good as ’Deer then he must be superb.

Fabulous writing really great work


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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