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amusemi
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A State of Disarray

0 posted 2002-03-03 10:32 AM


Oh, will you stop and play with me
Oh, can't you rest awhile
I always cause you grief and strife
I never make you smile

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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-03-03 10:37 AM


OH my....reminds me that I need to give all
three of them a big hug this morning...no
matter how much they fuss....I love them
dearly....Timothy, Ashley and Nikki....

amusemi
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A State of Disarray
2 posted 2002-03-03 10:47 AM


Yes, they do need their parents.  This was written to all the children in my family, in all the generations that have come and gone.

Thankyou for your response Magnus, and I'm glad you are going to hug your kids, today.

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3 posted 2002-03-03 11:49 AM


HAHA I love this so much, Reminds me of my grandchild coercing me to paint with him or play with play dough or that new gooze stuff. LOL. I loved this. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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4 posted 2002-03-03 08:32 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I have no family yet, and I'm too young to have one, but now I feel like hugging my sisters! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You havensuch a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-03-03 09:14 PM


Very true, Amusemi...sounds like my parents when I was little

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2002-03-03 10:32 PM


I think we all felt this way as children, and our children felt this way. Very well done.

Nan

ecrivan
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7 posted 2002-03-04 01:45 AM


yes, this says it for those awkward years when kids, know they need their parents and yet they can also cause grief


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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2002-03-05 11:58 AM


I will take the time
I enjoy playing with you
I am smiling now
I almost forgot the time
but you are most important

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-03-05 11:18 PM


AmuseMi~
A sad little reminder that children read the signals grown-ups (?) put out~

Hugs are a *MAKE-TIME* priority~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Larry C
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10 posted 2002-03-05 11:42 PM


Remind me to smile all the time
I chose to have you and your mine
So come and sit in my lap with your book
And I'll try to always recognize that look

[This message has been edited by Larry C (03-05-2002 11:44 PM).]

peaches73533
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11 posted 2002-03-06 01:28 AM


I chose to bring you into this world
My two boys and my one little girl
So come close and lend me your ear
And listen to what you shall hear
I love you all more thn you'll ever know
So let's take some time and go where you want to go
Here's a hug and a kiss
And know when were not together that you I do miss

Peaches

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