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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-03-03 09:11 AM



I will love you till remember when
our time was gone and once again
protecting you within my arms
as I hold you close, take your charms

I will let you have words of love
when I sing from the heights above
I will carry you in soft bliss
As I give to you a moist kiss

Slowly shadows walk the seashore
as you yearn and whisper of more
Only our hearts can feel love's soft touch
as we each are giving so much

Walk with me in the pale of light
Let my arm guide and hold you tight
Dance romance as we court the Ball
till the chimes toll and end it all.

Upon the break of day we do rest
with softest hair lying ‘pon chest
till when we bid the Ball adieu
as silvery moon falls from view.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (03-03-2002 09:12 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-03 09:12 AM


absolutely gorgeous writing.  Loved this, now to the library with it...

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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2 posted 2002-03-03 09:21 AM


Beautiful romantic writing Magnus, I love these lines.
"Dance romance as we court the Ball
till the chimes toll and end it all.'
Great work here, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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3 posted 2002-03-03 09:23 AM


Good write Magnus, enjoyed
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4 posted 2002-03-03 09:28 AM


Nothing like waking up and reading a big *SIGH* first thing in the morning.
Well done and hugs good morning to you!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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5 posted 2002-03-03 09:40 AM


Thank you GS...pleased that you enjoyed..
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6 posted 2002-03-03 09:40 AM


Floria...pleased that you enjoyed...
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7 posted 2002-03-03 09:41 AM


Sy...thank you very much...
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8 posted 2002-03-03 09:42 AM


Nancy,  pleased that I have given you a
waking sigh....good morning to you...

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9 posted 2002-03-03 10:30 AM



A beautiful tribute to La Luna....

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10 posted 2002-03-03 10:36 AM


Karilea...thank you and good morning..
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