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Daemonyin
Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 31


0 posted 2002-03-03 01:20 AM


How can I scream
with just paper and pen?
How can my silence
burn the fiend within?

When it comes to me... This could be a fad.
How do I deal without stabbing the notepad?

How can I let you see
the volume of a silent scream?

How do I rage without indulging my fists?
How dare I sing with dischordant lyrics?
How do I cry without eyeing my wrists?

How do I keep
venting with ink?
How do I hold back
salt water grief?

How do I scream
without being seen
as more offensive than
I feel I must be.

[This message has been edited by Daemonyin (03-03-2002 06:14 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Dade - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-03-03 02:26 AM


Dade,
answer into the pillow and often. Strong and angry write. I understand.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2002-03-03 03:25 AM


How do I keep
venting with ink?
How do I hold back
salt water grief?

Liked those lines alot!
And I can identify with the rage!
Or was that a fad?  

Nice to read you~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-03-03 11:08 AM


How can I let you see
the volume of a silent scream?
=================================

You just did with this powerful aching write.
These expressions touch places deep...write it out, scream with your pen, its your soul's voice, and when its written this honestly and constructively it wont offend.
Good to see your name here again.
jm

Dont walk before me, lord knows I cant follow
dont walk behind me, I dont think that I can lead
dont walk around me cause you know how dizzy I get.

Mistletoe Angel
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Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2002-03-03 12:20 PM




(BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) Oh Dade, this is such a powerful and anguishing write, sweet friend, always write out how you feel, for we are all here for you and to get the burdens off our shoulders promises relief in the end! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dade, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-03-03 12:44 PM


You just did.
Continue to write it out.
Powerful write here...well done!
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Daemonyin
Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 31

6 posted 2002-03-03 05:06 PM


Thank you
I appreciate your replys more than you know.

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