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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2002-03-02 11:52 PM


Well, I never promised the best poem... LOL.. but here is my answer to the challange..



Unbound, unblinded
Unburdened, unbroken
Undaunted, unaffected
Unconstrained, unadulterated
Unspoken
Unapologetic




[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-03-2002 12:43 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-02 11:56 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is a wonderful reply to the challenge, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) Your words always touch our hearts unbelievably, sweet friend, we all love you so much! YAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-03 12:03 PM


Tara - I sure could not have met this challenge.  I felt this expressed a discovery of freedom within oneself, to live our lives the way we want to.  Anyway, I enjoyed.

Dave

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3 posted 2002-03-03 12:10 PM


Noah - As always, thank you for your wonderful reply

Dave - That is what I was hoping it would be seen as .  I had my doubts about meeting this challange.  I kept putting off doing it until I finally said enough and put my mind to work

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
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4 posted 2002-03-03 12:43 PM


beautiful!
i know a bit more about the lady behind it than some, i think, (heh) and as such my perspective on this is a bit different... to me, this speaks of defiance towards the chains of the past.

my dear, i come bearing gifts... namely, a cold chisel and a sledge let's get those chains off right now, shall we?
-Dave

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5 posted 2002-03-03 01:52 AM


You did very well!
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6 posted 2002-03-03 02:13 AM


uniquely understated
Kethry

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7 posted 2002-03-03 05:22 PM


ah, a character sketch. . . I like it. . .

great job Tara. . . maybe you and Dave should work together on one using only the letters D and U!!  LOL

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8 posted 2002-03-03 05:33 PM


Dave - Keep that chisel and sledge handy, they will be needed, as you know. Love you babe

Micheal - Well thank you very much

Sven - I'm glad you liked   And nooooooooooooooooo! At least not for a little bit LOL.. my brain needs a rest

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9 posted 2002-03-08 05:38 PM


kwel and I had trouble with E

Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie.


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10 posted 2002-03-08 07:58 PM


Unusually unique understated understanding.

Challenge wonderfully met.

((Tara))
-newell
  

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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11 posted 2002-03-08 08:29 PM


GREAT!  Since I can't write this stuff (you've used all my words...hee, hee) I'll just hop on your coattails and add...at the end...

                                            unfettered,
                                            UNDONE!


Now...I feel I've participated!

jwesley


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12 posted 2002-03-08 09:05 PM


utterly unique utterance under ur umbrella!

Nice Tara....

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13 posted 2002-03-08 09:21 PM


Unbelievably Unique. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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14 posted 2002-03-08 09:57 PM


Well, you sure did this good.
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