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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-03-02 10:00 PM


Lovely Lady Lydia
lasviciously licked Lord Leo's lips
living life lustily
Lunatic lout later left
loveless lover lonely..


Is this the way to do it, Sir Sven?

© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-02 10:04 PM




YAY!!! YES, YES, THIS IS WONDERFUL, SWEET FRIEND, I KNEW YOU COULD DO IT!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) This is outstanding, sweet friend, wonderful imagery and alliteration both fills this poem, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-02 10:40 PM


this is my favorite..great job.. haa yes the way to do it hon hugssss

                  ~Vic

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3 posted 2002-03-02 11:18 PM


Yes Sandra! And, you did it fantastically.
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4 posted 2002-03-02 11:28 PM


Awwww this is fantastic!!! Loved it and no doubt Sven will too....


Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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5 posted 2002-03-02 11:36 PM


Sandra...Looks like lonely love lost...

This could have been one heckuva tongue
twister....

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6 posted 2002-03-03 05:23 PM


indeed it is Lady Lydia. . .

well done. . .

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7 posted 2002-03-03 06:48 PM


HAHAHA  "lasviciously licked Lord Leo's lips"
I hope he didn't have a mustache. LOL.. great one, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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