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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-03-02 06:56 PM

You are the
Sun that shines
On the cloudy days
The rivers bend
As it laughs
To the ocean deep
The glitter
Of diamonds
As they
Shoot the sky
A golden
Stream of
Foot prints
On the sand
The brilliant waves
As they
Tumble ecstasy
The winters
First snowfall
Gently floating down
The mist of rain as it
Baptizes the earth
And brings the flowers
To full bloom
Autumns
Colorful leaves dancing
The ground
This is but a glimpse
Of who you are.....
Just some of the things
I see
Each time you
read your poetry
To me……

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-03-2002 09:48 AM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-03-02 06:59 PM

Having poetry read to you is a beautiful
thing, a wonderful feeling...I hope he
does for you....Such joy that must be..

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-03-02 07:03 PM

Greeneyes,
such a beautiful write.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-02 07:09 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love forever read to you and touch your loving heart with loves song! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a beautiful glimpse of magic from your golden heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2002-03-02 07:10 PM

there's always so much more that comes out when a poem is read. . . like this one. . .

well done my friend. . .

--------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-03-02 07:51 PM

Lauren darling girl this is awesome, I mean it, this is an incredible piece of writing, utterly utterly amazing writing it’s so full of beauty and is utterly utterly beautiful. You always excel in this you’ve proved, if it needed it, that you are an exceptional writer.

Your heart simply sings in this darling girl, truly exceptional writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2002-03-02 08:27 PM

The glitter
Of diamonds
As they
Shoot the sky
A golden
Stream of
Foot prints
On the sand
The brilliant waves
As they
Tumble ecstasy
===========================

someone is inspiring wonderful things in your pen and heart dear poetess L.
this is lovely with a capital L

Beautiful expressions in this girlie.

mothy me

Dont walk before me, lord knows I cant follow
dont walk behind me, I dont think that I can lead
dont walk around me cause you know how dizzy I get.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-03-02 08:58 PM

Wonderful love poem, gave me a nice feeling, reading.
Sandra

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2002-03-02 09:20 PM

special the words from a special poetess. as always L soft and lovely like your soul.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2002-03-02 09:27 PM

'tis wonderful to be so enraptured, and then, to be able to express the feeling so well.
Just reading this...is enough for me.

jwesley

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-03-02 09:44 PM

Beautiful thoughts from you...James

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2002-03-03 12:02 PM

Lauren,
Utterly awesome. Ain't life grand! It doesn't get better than that.

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

12 posted 2002-03-03 12:07 PM

Greeneyes - A truly fine write. Well done.

Dave

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

13 posted 2002-03-03 12:15 PM

Lauren,

I loved the way this tumbled down the page...

I enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

14 posted 2002-03-03 09:46 AM

Lauren, right from the heart this was, so beautiful. I see your picture didnt show up, I tried to do that and I couldn't either, I think you need a server to put the pic on first. Lovely write without a pic, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

15 posted 2002-03-03 06:25 PM

What a wonderful tribute to someone you love, Lauren...I hope he's for real.
He sure sounds wonderful.

The glitter
Of diamonds
As they
Shoot the sky
A golden
Stream of
Foot prints
On the sand

Beautifully written

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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