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Please Forgive Me But...
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Please Forgive Me But... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Please Forgive Me But...for DR. LOVE You caught me with my lips in want In need of kisses that yours behold Surrendering my heart to you In need I am, of one not cold. Upon a dream of heart in mind I need that touch in solitaire Shades of "lifetime" embracing me My lips, I place into your care. Kisses that can weaken me Raise my heart from silent beat Unfold my nakedness in yours A velvet touching to complete. 'Tis all I ask from Doctor love Beneath the moon, his passion of. ~Wynter |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
beautifuly done. Lia |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
again I thank you for reading me..you are appreciated hugs Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
nakdthoughts, when you are in want the yearning shows and grows. Excellent! Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And he will have just he right prescription for you have given him the symptoms well.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wynter, Dr Love still makes house calls? Enjoyed your write.  |
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Kelley_Edwards Junior Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 21USA |
You voice the yearnings of the heart very well. I enjoyed this piece. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes..there is nothing like a kiss from lips that can make you think you are in another world..now if only I can find another pair to go with mine *s Thanks Keth Barry, ah I do believe the Good Doctor has a way with all...and can bring a smile to anyone's face...he has that bedside manner smiles and thanks M Sy, I think the Dr. is still looking for the open door I have here on the side porch... He is welcome anytime *s I am winking here or trying too between coughs. M Kelley, thank you for enjoying..this is a challenge by Interloper to request the Dr.s help and he shall respond *s Maureen "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Forgive you? For writing this!? I think NOT! LOL...good job! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles) Well, you know what Mary Poppins says, a spoonful of sugar helps the medicine go down, which I'm sure one kiss holds! (smiles) I am sure Doctor Love has the perfect prescription for you, sweet friend, this is wonderful! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Karilea...*s thanks well, I miss kissing...*s Noah...I am sure the good Dr. will come through with something for me *s thanks M |
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quietwaters Junior Member
since 2002-02-04
Posts 30delray beach, florida |
when i'm alone with my thoughts..and just drifting..like on water...i drag myself to a "ledge" sometimes...to rest...and wonder...when might one kiss be most poignantly beautiful: whether while one exchanges the moist warmth, or on hindsight;where and when your lips are dry...and wanting... somehow, you make me wish i was right there...when you most needed...kissing  it is good to know that some people might have been looking at the same full moon i was staring at (a couple of nights ago, i think)... yearning for a moon-dappled kiss to push away the ...cold.... take care...stranger...friend... ray [This message has been edited by quietwaters (03-03-2002 01:00 PM).] |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
I can't help but smile. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ray, this is one of the most wonderful responses I have ever received..on a day when I am feeling a bit defeated, it has calmed me, given me thought..and you know, I did step outside a few nights back to catch the moon and its haze resting in the purple velvet skies.... now I have to tell you I keep reading this over and over. I am one to read much too much into words although I try not to..but you touched something inside, maybe the wanting, and with it came a tear or two to stop me for a moment. A tear kissed my cheek...rolled down to those wanting lips, dry until then. Thank you for this stranger..friend. M J. K. Mitchell..I am glad I left you smiling..I hope the kind Dr. can service me properly. *s Maureen "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Maureen, I am sure you will be in good hands with Dr. Love. Good write....enjoyed. Better have him check that cough as well. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
darn, I completely forgot to tell him about my cough..I didn't feel that was as important as my lips being kissed..maybe that is all it will take...maybe that is what I thought a few days ago..that some prince would have kissed that frog out of my throat...a different twist on that tale *s thanks Nancy..if it doesn't go away soon, my life will be taking a dive. ((hugs)) M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-03-2002 04:14 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Look for your prescription Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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