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woodtic
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since 2002-01-06
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0 posted 2002-03-02 02:43 AM



Broken loved,
lonely,
lamenting leaving,
longing.
Laughing lowd.
Lowly lowered,
languished,
last listed in the log.
Laboured listless,
leaning,
Languid alley cat.
Licking, lashing,
loathing imagine that.
Loafers leather
lean and long.
Lover's lever
ever strong.
Lusty loons land in
loamy lake bed lost.
Lovelly lovers lose,
lamenting loss.
Lazy lidded lions
loaf in laundry.
Ladies of the evening
lash out levely.
Learned lads lack
lesser lanes of truth.
Lent,
lively laments,
leave only
lentils little bean.
Leafs land lightly,
life leads on.

[This message has been edited by woodtic (03-02-2002 06:57 PM).]

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-03-02 03:46 AM


lovely, liquid lament.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



woodtic
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2 posted 2002-03-02 12:28 PM


loved to learn that you looked in landing a reply.
I don't get around much and am always happy to have been read. Thanx again.

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3 posted 2002-03-02 01:23 PM




(big hugggssssss) WOW, THIS IS WONDERFUL, I LOVE IT!!! This is sad but wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, yes, may life lead on but may a lucid lovely lament lead lovingly to true love! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
4 posted 2002-03-02 01:54 PM


I'm not even gonna try to find L words to use for this- I think you used them all. Great write.

Nan

woodtic
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since 2002-01-06
Posts 87

5 posted 2002-03-02 06:54 PM


Thanx for the read every body. Apparently there are even more L words than those on this page. The numbers of words there are in the English language alone leads to the conclusion that the possibilities of poetry are infinite. Or at least they might as well be, to such a small mind as this.
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