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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-03-02 01:48 AM


All Over Me

Of all the beautiful
things ever revealed to me
nothing is more beautiful
then the love you
have shared with me.

They say love is like
the wind flowing free.
I can't see the wind or love
but I can feel your love
free flowing all over me.

JamesLee
March02
2002
Love
You
Jin



© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
woodtic
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1 posted 2002-03-02 01:57 AM


Liked that very much.
ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-03-02 02:04 AM


love is like the wind flowing free..once it
hits boundaries then that's another story...nicely rendered


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with you
3 posted 2002-03-02 11:39 AM


James, this is wonderful and now one of my (many) favorites from you
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4 posted 2002-03-02 11:54 AM




(big hugggssssss) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know your love will swoon over these words and want to forever hold you close and be yours! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is so gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-02 12:03 PM


such a beautiful loving poem James..
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6 posted 2002-03-02 02:26 PM


James darling boy this is such superb writing. Utterly utterly amazing writing it’s so full of beauty and is utterly utterly beautiful. You always excel in this you’ve proved, if it needed it, that you are an exceptional writer.

This is an absolutely beautiful and perfect example of all your posts, perfectly divine I love it

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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7 posted 2002-03-02 02:50 PM


James this is as lovely as all the others you have written. I could just see all of these in a nice little poetry book. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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8 posted 2002-03-02 03:23 PM


Beautiful words spoken here James....love it!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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9 posted 2002-03-02 03:34 PM


This is very beautiful, James, certainly one of your best!  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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10 posted 2002-03-02 04:18 PM


James,

    Have I told you lately that I just love reading you?

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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