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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-03-02 01:31 AM



Your fragile fingers, aching fingers,
~~~fingers of gentleness.
Your fingers thrilling me whenever
I imagine their touch.Your fingers
speaking to my heart of longing,
of loving that never ceases
to amaze me.I imagine
your fingers wrapped around a pen
~~~illiciting such immense beauty
from your soul, such exquisite poetry.
I think of how gentle; yet rugged
your hands must be.And, I yearn
to intertwine my fingers with yours
~~~locked in love's tender hand-hold.

And, I imagine the fragility,
the incomparable pleasure of your touch.
Your fingers speaking love, speaking

~~~~passion into being.


© Copyright 2002 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-03-02 03:53 AM


Wow! I think Dr Love would find this challenge digitally correct.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-03-02 01:16 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I know these desires all too well and I am sure Doctor Love can help you with all his heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-03-04 03:08 PM


Whoa.  Take two M&M Chocolate Peanuts and call me in a week

What a challenge you have presented me ... whew!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-03-04 03:24 PM


Sounds like Dr. Love may have to take a bit of time whipping up a prescription for this one Ivy Rose.   Good write!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

strbbux
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5 posted 2002-03-06 12:14 PM


I missed this most beautiful poem Ivy and only found it because of interlopers reply poetry. this is wonderful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Startime
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6 posted 2002-03-06 12:17 PM


*sigh* oh my..I love it...It is truly amazing as only you can do it, Ivy...stunning. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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7 posted 2002-03-06 01:18 PM


Very romantic, very tender, and very well written, sweet poet Ivy Rose. I love the contrast of the rough strong hand gently holding a pen, and the imagery of your hands entertwined.
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