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Slight of White
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Slight of White |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Slight of White I shouldn't but had to, seeing those eyes, needing to feel the truth within lies. Always distortions, tall tales, slight of white ended today as I closed down the fight. Can't touch me, no contact, forever dismissed, no holding, or fondling, no tenderly kissed. Fooled once again by the silence of still, tonight I sleep soundly, new dreams mine to fill. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done my friend..hugss...best wishes to you always...  ~Vic "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"needing to feel the truth within lies" oh I understand this..... very emotional write.... *hugs* for you  |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
beautifully done!! lia |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thanks ~V~ sometimes it takes a brick thrown at me for me to get the message..this one came across loud and clear. M SEA..sorry you have felt the same.. hugs M Lia..love your name *s thank you again Maureen |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Maureen...very, very good... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Oh Maureenj, we all understand how you feel, it too can be so hard to realize it when we really want to hold something dear but I know if we just have the strength to let it go and dream on, we will be much happier in the end! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, may you find all the joy your heart deserves and find truth in it forever and ever! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is touching! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sunshine, thank you..sometimes words stick in your mind and have to be emptied first chance one gets. Noah..."don't worry be happy" as someone has told me recently...my yesterday was only the start of my today...and I will forever be much better off now... thank you both Maureen "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Lovely, Maureen! ((Maureen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Sounds like you're starting over, Maureen Always distortions, tall tales, slight of white ended today as I closed down the fight. I hope everything works out well ((hugggsss)) copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hooray for Maureen Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Silver One..I had hoped this one slipped down a bit by now... I certainly am a moody one aren't I. Today is a much better day for me. Glad to see you back safely, Newell *s (hugs) Maureen Lyra, sometimes you have no choice but to go back to the drawing boards..and this time I will design my own future *s hugs M Hey "I"...show me the money....... no I mean the prescription *s thanks M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
When the eyes are filled with lies, there truly is nothing to base feeling on...well done! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maureen A strong ending to the ache..good! Much enjoyed this poem! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Dulci, well some think their lies are for the better I guess. To each their own *s Martie..yes, the ending to what could have been but wasn't...now justanother page in a journal. Thank You both M |
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