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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-03-01 10:05 PM


Lost in You
AMK
3/01/02

its in moments such as these
late at night that I feel your touch
even though you are so far away
i still feel the intensity of your gaze

like fine lace you touch me just barely
caressing my skin and bringing a blush to my skin
as i feel your lips pressing
pressing against my own with urgency

i awaken from my sleepy dream
still lost with thoughts of you
as the moon hangs high in the sky
streaming through window reminding me of where i am

lost in you

and then the warm breeze blows through the open window
im longing to feel you
even though in some ways
its as if your presence never leaves me

excitement flashes through my eyes
as the thought of seeing you soon springs to mind
my heart beating fast
as pure adrenaline rushes through me serving to remind me that I am

lost in you

i can feel my body tense though also with nervousness
as i wonder are you thinking of me right now too
something tells me you are
as the stars of the night wink down at me and once again I am

lost in you

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2002-03-01 10:09 PM


Amy,
I love this
your writing has grown so much
it's wonderful to see

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-03-01 10:12 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, you are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you always write the prettiest loveliest words! (kiss on cheek) May true loves happiness forever fill your heart and may you lose yourself in his eyes, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Krissy
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3 posted 2002-03-20 01:50 PM


Amy hi lil sister / aunt / cousin again this is really exquisite writing you are without doubt one of the most emotive writers I’ve ever read. Beautiful piece from you very well done


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Honeybee
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4 posted 2002-03-20 01:54 PM



I agree that you have grown in your writing ability...this is a sensual beauty, and, it's perhaps my favourite of yours now.

It's a keeper

Take care Amy-girlie,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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5 posted 2002-03-20 05:11 PM


loved it
Sven
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6 posted 2002-03-21 03:37 PM


wonderful. . . it could be a song. . . I know that it could Amy. . . you have grown indeed. . . and that's even more wonderful to see. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Aimster
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7 posted 2002-03-22 11:25 AM


thank you all for your wonderful
replies to my work. as always your
words mean the world to me. a special
thank you to sea and john! john thank
you for your wonderful compliment, and
yes maybe it could be a song but i don't
know how to compose music but maybe i could
turn it into lyrics. and sea thank you
for always being in such support of my
work. i feel i have grown as a writer,
but have much work yet to do. thank you
all in poetry land! love to you all.

amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

rosepetals25
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8 posted 2002-03-22 07:02 PM


Amy,

     I've been falling behind as of late I come back and you have tons of poems up lol.  Not that I am complaining, I love reading your stuff

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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