bbbbbbbbbut (Sven’s Challenge)

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Open Poetry #19

bbbbbbbbbut (Sven’s Challenge)

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-03-01 07:10 PM

bbbbbbbbbbut (Sven’s Challenge)

…..but because beyond…beliefs bound
beautiful bruised butterflies bond
bringing balanced bravery back breathing
bright beacons blending bittersweet
breathtaking beginnings built behind black

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (03-02-2002 03:42 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-01 07:30 PM

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is wonderful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words speak with hope of a brand new day of blissful beginnings and promises! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2002-03-01 11:36 PM

This is really good.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-03-02 12:09 PM

Bravo butterfly. Brilliant!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2002-03-02 10:17 AM

but because beyond…beliefs bound

hi helen,
i liked the above line very much..succinct and powerful...

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2002-03-02 10:20 AM

Behind black backdrops beacons beam!

Neat Helen

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-03-02 04:10 PM

very nice, Helen

M

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-03-02 07:05 PM

well done helen. . .

I really like the flow of this one. . .great job. . .

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