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Open Poetry #19

Seisms A Little Hot!!

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2002-03-01 06:11 PM

Center
to center
the earth moves
in tremulous seisms.
Soul
to soul
our bodies move in
climatic pulsations.
The Earth shudders
and quakes.
And, we tremble
and shiver
at loving's fulfillment.
The center and the Earth
becoming one;
and we move into
each other,
~~~connecting,
becoming one body.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-03-01 06:37 PM

Ivy rose, this is awesome. a wonderful creative poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-01 07:46 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is very beautifully sensual, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shine with the flame of passion and romance! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-03-01 07:54 PM

Beautiful Ivy...very...and warm too....

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-03-02 06:49 AM

Ivy Rose-
Very beautiful write.
I enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Lia Fail
Member

since 2002-02-26

Posts 80

5 posted 2002-03-02 08:21 AM

Beautifuly written, i could feel the passion.
wonderful imagery.
Lia

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2002-03-02 08:53 AM

this should have an earthquake alert IvyRose. It was so moving.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2002-03-02 09:04 AM

Very well and uniquely done Ivy. And, yep...could easily be construed as...HOT!
Wonderful...

jwesley

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