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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-03-01 11:48 AM


~I Want~
Interloper’s Challenge

I want dreams that flow with truth’s sublime
Kisses that will last until the end of time
Touches as soft as a butterfly’s kiss
Feelings that flood over my heart like this
The truth spoken with love locked in
Feel the heat of fire flash over my skin
I want to be breathless all the night through
To know the touch in my soul of you

I want fires to break out when you touch me
The heat and flames burning incandescently
Knowing the wonder of a star spangled night
Revel in the touch of moonbeams silver light
Lying in the sun feeling its warming kiss
Knowing there’s nothing better than this
I want to be drenched in love’s liquid fire
To bathe with you in flaming desire

I want to trust that you love and adore only me
Know that you’ll be mine for all eternity
Breathing in the scent of your utter soul
Knowing that it is me who keeps you whole
Play with you in delight and never cease
Live all my days in love’s timeless peace
I want to be all that I can and then some more
To take to the air and simply soar

Marsha



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2002-03-01 11:57 AM


Dear Marsha,
You took to the air and soared with this one. I want all those things too. Is there enough to share?

Nan

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2 posted 2002-03-01 12:02 PM


Yah ... I'll take a helping of that

Can't help but like this one Marsha

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3 posted 2002-03-01 12:02 PM


You definately soar with this amazing write dear Mushy.  INCREDIBLE!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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4 posted 2002-03-01 01:25 PM


I want to be able to express myself as you do Marsha!! Lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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5 posted 2002-03-01 01:26 PM


These are some wonderful things to want and you have penned this beautifully, great poem Marsha dear, and I hope you get all you want and then some. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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6 posted 2002-03-01 02:11 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I just know you will find all your heart desires, sweet friend, just as I know Doctor Love has the perfect suggestions for you! (kiss on cheekj) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may true love fill your golden heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-03-01 02:13 PM


Wow Mushy....superbly done...with a million
adjectives.....excellent poem..

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8 posted 2002-03-01 03:48 PM


If you want to be all that you can be, we have openeings in the US Army

Your prescription is being formulated

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Kethry
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9 posted 2002-03-02 12:32 PM


Mushy,
I want a double serving of all this. And I want it for you.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Lia Fail
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10 posted 2002-03-02 12:46 PM


You use such wonderful imagery. beautifly written.
Lia

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11 posted 2002-03-04 03:04 PM


Prescription posed.
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12 posted 2002-03-04 03:11 PM


Yummy Marsha...now I'm goint to go find out what the Doc recommends for you.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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