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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-03-01 11:32 AM


Slow Dancing
AMK
3/01/02

Pulling you out onto the dance floor
I hold you tight against me
Feeling the flow of the music
I've never felt more free

You are the love of my life
With you is where I always want to be
As the music just takes us far away
Your beautiful face is all I can see

I want to slow dance with you
Today and forevermore
For it's with you my sweet baby
That to the heavens I can soar

I didn't know love
Until the music began to play
As thousands of notes fill the air
With you is where I will stay

Your eyes so enchanting
As I pull you even closer still
Your lips now tracing over mine
I swear as God as my witness
I've never felt a love more real

A thousand symphonies now are playing
They are celebrating this new found love
As you and I continue to slow dance here on Earth
An angel cries happy tears from above

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
strbbux
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1 posted 2002-03-01 11:34 AM


That last line blew me away Aimster, I wish you many more months and years of happiness. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-03-01 12:45 PM


Amy darling lil sis of my heart this is one of your utter utter best poems darling as always you write with utter wonder, your pen is dipped into magic dust I think. And this caught me within it and carried me on

This is one of your finest poems ever it shines like a jewel in an ocean of mediocrity. Not that your work is ever mediocre it isn’t and never has been but this is utterly wonderfully good.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-03-01 01:40 PM


"I didn't know love
Until the music began to play
As thousands of notes fill the air
With you is where I will stay

Your eyes so enchanting
As I pull you even closer still
Your lips now tracing over mine
I swear as God as my witness
I've never felt a love more real

A thousand symphonies now are playing
They are celebrating this new found love
As you and I continue to slow dance here on Earth
An angel cries happy tears from above"




(smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this part made me cry to feel how beautiful and happy you are and the love that shines from your golden heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you be married in a lifetime of loves happiness! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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4 posted 2002-03-01 01:52 PM


I want to slow dance with you
Today and forevermore
For it's with you my sweet baby
That to the heavens I can soar

I didn't know love
Until the music began to play
As thousands of notes fill the air
With you is where I will stay

Your eyes so enchanting
As I pull you even closer still
Your lips now tracing over mine
I swear as God as my witness
I've never felt a love more real
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Congrats on your 6 months
I just had my 25th.. This is how we spent it too  : )

Krissy
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 556
kent England
5 posted 2002-03-01 06:38 PM


Auntie Amy Oh this is really lovely, I’ve read quite a few of your older poems and I read one the other day that I thought was your best, now I think this is. You’re just getting better. Beautiful words and lovely flowing style you certainly can write. I like this I really do


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2002-03-01 06:49 PM


Time flies when your in Heaven on Earth.
Happy Anniversary Amy-girl!!  

SEA
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with you
7 posted 2002-03-01 09:09 PM


Happy Anniversary Amy!!!
the feeling here, so happy and loving....how wonderful I am so happy you are in love this is beautiful Amy

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