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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-03-01 07:03 AM




Snow clouds moving in
Moon glow playing hide and seek
Winter is still here

Promises of white
Barren ground shall seek a dress
Marriage between two

Soon the veil of snow
Shall meet and greet Mother Earth
Snow clouds moving in


© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-01 07:26 AM


Beautiful images

~A~

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2 posted 2002-03-01 08:37 AM


It is suppose to snow here this afternoon..you must not be too far away ha..
lovely images you have painted Sunshine..

           ~Victoria~

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce


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3 posted 2002-03-01 08:46 AM


These are wonderful Karilea.  You can't be too far from me either as it is expected here tonight and tomorrow. I love snow!  Good write!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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4 posted 2002-03-01 09:12 AM


Hey, these were really good Sunshine...

jwesley

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5 posted 2002-03-01 09:39 AM


snow is ok...but NO MORE ICE!!!!

nicely done K.....

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6 posted 2002-03-01 10:24 AM


Karilea~

'Promises of white
Barren ground shall seek a dress
Marriage between two'


This is exquisite ~

RSVP-ing ... glad I won't be able to attend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2002-03-01 10:26 AM


This is awesome sunshine. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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8 posted 2002-03-01 10:28 PM


winter winding down
sunshine touches everyone
with Karilea smiles

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9 posted 2002-03-01 10:34 PM


nicely written. i could picture it in my mind.the imagery was beautiful.
Lia

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10 posted 2002-03-01 10:46 PM


Karilea, as much as I love snow, it could prove hazardous to me these days.  Another good reason to be living on the coast where we don't get that lovely stuff.   This is so pretty and reminds me of all times I spent at the window in anticipation of the first snowflake.   Nice work!

Michael

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11 posted 2002-03-01 11:04 PM


Absolutely stunning, Karilea.

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12 posted 2002-03-01 11:08 PM


Sunshine~

Could you please send it my way??? LOL I LOVE and MISS the snow so much.....I really enjoyed this, very beautiful piece....


Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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