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with one skin we tremble

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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 03-01-2002 06:05 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

you were the night wing bird
that made shadows
in full moon day sky
I heard your feathers dance
they were fingers in wind mouths
making wet whisper noise

you came to me after others
when the watchers had gone
to their sleep heaven beds
it was ok then you said
for your white dress
to become dirtyminded colors

we slept in the day and hunted
in the nights for each other only
we had belly talk hunger
for the wanton of your/my eyes
and out dark thought music
was weep wood of guitar song

we hung our poem skins
on wall brick windows
for the morning spirit to know
we listened then, to the chants
of cloud gods reading our prayers
we crossed our legs together

with one skin we trembled..

ęDark


[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (03-01-2002 08:37 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 ęDark 2k - All Rights Reserved
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with you


1 posted 03-01-2002 09:17 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

a very sensual, stirring write....
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 03-01-2002 09:57 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

sensual
for your eyes
humble words
touched

thank you
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 03-01-2002 02:18 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

Exquisite.
ThisDiamond

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (03-01-2002 02:19 PM).]

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 03-01-2002 02:50 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ThisDiamond,
I thank you
Martie
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5 posted 03-01-2002 03:14 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

DS

"we hung our poem skins
on wall brick windows
for the morning spirit to know
we listened then, to the chants
of cloud gods reading our prayers
we crossed our legs together

with one skin we trembled"

A sigh poem!
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6 posted 03-01-2002 03:14 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

a sigh maker for sure hon.  wonderful...

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 03-01-2002 04:18 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Ms martie, thank you for the sigh
of reply
I appreciate you
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 03-01-2002 04:19 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Gentle Spirit,
thank you for letting me
close to your sigh glances
rwood
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9 posted 03-01-2002 07:11 PM       View Profile for rwood   Email rwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rwood

Yes...one flesh art. Tremble indeed. This dances rain.

Sincerely,
Regina
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Somewhere in time~


10 posted 03-01-2002 08:32 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

My oh my, Dark...
You do have a way about you...
Very unique and sensual style.
Enjoyed...
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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11 posted 03-01-2002 08:50 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is delightfully sensually beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of passion always light these pages wonderfully! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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12 posted 06-19-2004 11:25 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

My God, this is amazing, perhaps my favourite of yours now. With every new poem I read by you, my respect only grows.  I wish I had written this, it's a keeper.

Melissa~

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Listening to every heart


13 posted 01-15-2005 10:13 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


One thing about your poetry...
it is consistently good...
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14 posted 01-15-2005 02:52 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

This my favorite of yours, a perfect purr.
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