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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-02-28 09:38 PM



bees buzz beneath better business bureaus:
blow baby bubbles
blind brothers bellow below bloated boats
blow busted brine bubbles
blistered beachcomber beau balks,
blows bad benign bubbles
bare-breasted binkini blonds bore bulbous bodkins
burst bungled blown bubbles
breast-fed brats banter, burp beneath bibs
blow boisterous bubbles
bug-eyed bodyguards break basic barriers
burst bag balloons, blink blatantly,
blow behemoth-like bubbles!





[This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-28-2002 10:58 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-02-28 09:40 PM


this ones great E..*s

M

jwesley
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2 posted 2002-02-28 09:40 PM


unhuh!!  Yep!  And I'm still trying to say it, least wise write it...

Excellent my friend.

jwesley

ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-02-28 09:43 PM


Hey does take long to bring bees to beatlejuice...hehe


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4 posted 2002-02-28 09:53 PM




BRAVO!!! YOU'VE DONE IT AGAIN, THIS IS ANOTHER MARVELOUS REPLY TO THE CHALLENGE!!! (big hugggssssss) This somehow reminded me of a simile in William Shakespeare's "All's Well That Ends Well" where he uses honeybees as a comparison to the laborers of the world and to the bureaucracy! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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5 posted 2002-02-28 10:03 PM


great thought there Noah, thanks for clicking in


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