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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-02-28 09:14 PM



she came from a place called New Freedom
she'd dream of a life, a new kingdom
for her eyes have viewed plain
she is going insane
wants to travel by way of her wingdom

wants to fly and enjoy all the wonders
feel excitement from lightening and thunder
to be wetted by rain
to see sunshine again
filled with rainbows, she'd like to be under


she is searching for something not known
can't be drawn up or hammered or sewn
will feel when it's reached
a contentment beseeched
'til then her life's held "on postpone"


M

from Nov 99......

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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2002-02-28 09:16 PM


i enjoyed your collection muchly...i read afew today and couldn't resist and am glad to see yours also
jwesley
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Spring, Texas
2 posted 2002-02-28 09:21 PM


Limericks are so..."uplifting" aren't they.  They swing, sing...

well done nakdthoughts...

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2002-02-28 09:22 PM


I think limericks are fun ..*s thanks for yours, walt *s
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-02-28 09:36 PM


my eyes seemed to miss you j wesley
as you snuck in right after I pressed key
uplifting these words
aloud when they're heard
I love how these limericks impressed me

*s  thanks

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-02-28 09:44 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...I love these so much, sweet friend, these are soooooo wonderfully delightful! (kiss on cheek) You are so talented at these wonderfully exciting poems, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-28-2002 09:44 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2002-03-01 05:10 AM


thank you Noah
*s
M

Silver Streak
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7 posted 2002-03-05 09:48 AM


Very nice limerick!
((Maureen))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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