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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-02-28 05:36 PM

Must enjoy moonlit
walks along the oceans
shore, dance me under the
diamond night, dance
me in the rainy skies

Would have a strong
desire to frolic in the
out doors, take me riding
with Gypsy Wind, Summer Breeze
and Raven (my horses)

He will have brilliant eyes
that glance a sparkle
when he sees me,
and his smile should say
this is where I want to be

Would bring me wild flowers
from the road, that tells
me he took the time to think
of me with his own style
of arrangement, one
would be fine

Would be front and center
when I sing, so I could see his
eyes and adore him with
a smile, to let him know
all my words were for him

He would have a kind heart
to all living creatures and would
and share with me
a small little farm for my
horses, dogs, and cats

But most importantly
he would share his love with
me, as I would with him
we would best friends,
open and honest with each other (always)
and as long as we
were together we would
be happy~ *sigh*

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-28-2002 05:37 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-02-28 05:41 PM

Such a beautiful vision....Lauren....I hope
you have this in your life...you certainly
do deserve that.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-28 05:42 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo sweet and lovely, sweet friend, I too love horses so so much, though I miss riding one so much! (sigh) I too know just how you feel, for I dream of holding my love Joanna's hand and rollerblading with her in love and sharing each day as if it was summer outside and we were children again! (kiss on cheek) I just know with a loving heart like yours you will forever have true love close to your heart, sweet friend, and I bet ur love expert Doctor Love ha ssome great advice for you too! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is absolutely beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-02-28 06:40 PM

love the name of your horses...and your lovely words Lauren..hugs

~Vic

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-02-28 06:41 PM

May all your dreams come true Lauren, and wonderful beautiful dreams they are. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2002-02-28 07:14 PM

I have seen the moonlight, the stars and the rain with your eyes.
Have heard both your walk and dance in rambles.
And heard in words your songs.
But never guessed you love to fly, a Raven upon both Wind and Breeze alike ...
nor know of your favorite wildflower?
But I was aware of the "always". *s

Peace and Happiness - Always!

create an addiction .... share a smile!!

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

6 posted 2002-02-28 07:21 PM

Lauren Hi there this is a really beautiful list of desires and dreams. Wishes that will come true if you believe they will. Too many people give up their dreams because they are impractical, keep hold of your hopes. There’s magic out there if you only search for it

Beautiful flowing words of delight

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2002-02-28 07:31 PM

seems like a reasonable list to me.

You know I wish all these things for you too.
Next star I see has got your name on it.

Love the horses names...very very cool.
beautiful response to the challenge.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-02-28 07:54 PM

Gosh Lauren this is a wonderful list.
All you are asking are life's simple pleasures. And I too love the names of your horses!! Wildflowers picked from the side of the road....truly romantic!
Just beautiful.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

9 posted 2002-02-28 10:51 PM

Lauren,
I'm quite sure there is a line forming. So choose well...and peace and joy to you always. Always, always...dream.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2002-03-02 07:20 AM

this was beautiful..and now I must see how "I" responded *s

M

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2002-03-02 08:30 AM

heres a big hug and a big wish that you will have this again sweetie....and you are so deserving that I know it will come for you when you least expect it like it did for me. (how could anyone not just love you, but they better be darn good to you hon...or they will answer to me!!!) Love ya sweetie, this is a cool write.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2002-03-02 05:05 PM

I could ride upon
the waves of time with
raven, gsypy and
breeze all mine
stop along the
road side too
a daisy, a sunflower
one or two
dance the night
in diamonds
or pearls
of rainy skies
and all their swirls
I have walked the road
so many times....
these are but a thought
I have in sight...........

*S I G H*

Thanks for all the responses, this was a fun write to think about and dream about....

all....

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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