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Victoria
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0 posted 2002-02-28 05:00 PM



Sometimes love changes with time
but the love I have for you
still smoothly flows like a rhyme

sometimes wishes are too much to ask
maybe I don't deserve
but fantasies and memories of the past

life is but a song a dance till the end
than walking away
only looking back now and than

I wanted to share chocolate ice cream
or your favorite vanilla bean
to share it with you in my dreams

but you always wanted the cherry on top
I felt like a miscellaneous item
in a novelty shop

love still flows like sweet Hershey syrup
upon rocky mountains of love
sugar and spice and everything nice
and always a double dip of me for you


"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce



[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-28-2002 05:02 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-28 05:03 PM


"I wanted to share cherry garcia
or your favorite vanilla bean
to share it with you in my dreams

but you always wanted the cherry on top
I felt like a miscellaneous item
in a novelty shop

love still flows like sweet Hershey syrup
upon rocky mountains of love
sugar and spice and everything nice
and always a double dip of me for you"




(smiles) Mmmmmmmmm...this is a delicious and beautiful vision of true love, sweet friend, may your love forever hold your hand and take you over Jolly Raancher rainbows and over the cotton candy clouds of loves heavens! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is absolutely beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-28 05:05 PM


come now Vic....now I am craving a big scoop
of my favorite ice cream....Beautiful poem..
like it...

Victoria
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3 posted 2002-02-28 05:08 PM


thank you noah...i changed it to chocolate..thought it sounded better..although i love cherry garcia too ha...hugs

thank you barry...yes a double dip will do ya..

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4 posted 2002-02-28 05:28 PM


Hello Victoria

Wow! This was beautifully written and so very clever.....I loved it! I hope you are well.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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5 posted 2002-02-28 05:39 PM


thank you Sue..yes i am well and hope you are too..nice to hear from you hugss

                ~Vic

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6 posted 2002-02-28 11:07 PM


Sweets can be great, and still your stomach hurts later.
Sandra

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7 posted 2002-02-28 11:51 PM


haa...you always make me laugh sandra..nothing we love is good for us ha..not fair is it? hugss

       ~Vic

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8 posted 2002-03-01 07:36 AM


~V~ you could never be
a miscellaneous item
*s
hugss
M

Victoria
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9 posted 2002-03-01 09:24 AM


Thank you hon...i know ..nice to hear from you this morning hugsss

              ~Victoria~

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10 posted 2002-03-01 10:32 AM


Your lines are beutiful.
"life is but a song a dance till the end"
Beautiful as always Victoria, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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11 posted 2002-03-01 11:39 AM


thank you dear one hugss..always nice hearing from you..

               ~Vic

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