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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-28 02:24 PM


He will set your heart aflame.
He will give you his heart to tame.
Your happiness his only aim,
all his loving to your acclaim.

He will stand and take your hands.
He will give in to all your demands.
Upon his heart you place your brands,
creating a love that withstands.

He will put you in first place.
He will love you with all his grace.
You both will soar to stellar space
and all your fears he will displace.

He will carry you to the brink.
He will form an unbreakable link.
From his lips you will deeply drink
and your lives will forever be in sync.

He will set your lips afire.
He will arouse you in sparse attire.
You will be played like a lyre,
vibrating with lovely inspire.

He will hold you until tonight.
He will give you love's delight.
You will receive what you invite;
the unceasing love you incite.

In response to:  Someone …

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-02-28 02:49 PM




BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhh...you are such a wonderful doctor indeed, I just know Startime will forever be delighted by your fabulous advice, maybe you too can help me, dearest doctor, I am writing out my thoughts now for you! (big hugggssssss) I LOVE IT!!! This challenge is very inventive and fun, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon
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2 posted 2002-02-28 11:05 PM


Fabulous, sounds like a wonderful man, where did you say he was? And does he have a brother?
Sandra

Larry C
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3 posted 2002-02-28 11:34 PM


Interloper,
See now...I thought sparse attire was her job! LOL Oh well, somebody has to do it. ROTFL Great write.

Duncan
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4 posted 2002-03-01 12:25 PM


She deserves every word of it!
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-03-01 03:23 AM


Very nice...James
Startime
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6 posted 2002-03-07 12:49 PM


Oh my gosh...I found it...You did one for me...oh thank you...thank you...this is absolutely my most favorite of all your poems...Sweet Dr. Love...you have touched the soul of this star and left her with a smile in her heart and hope in her soul....I wonder if such a man exists...well, no matter...I love the vision of him that you have given me...I love it...oh yes...I love it...**big big big hugs** Thank you, so much.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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