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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-02-28 12:08 PM


Taste The Flame

Heated skin in passions blaze
Firestorm in sensual maze
Seer the soul with fire’s touch
With this heat you want so much

Touch the flame burning bright
Lead you into fire’s night
Don’t ask for why or how
Give into your need right now

Take a step into this flame
Taste the heat learn its name
Reach with the whole of you
Do what you have to do

This is your time and place
Time to let the fire race
In your blood in your veins
Nothing but passions flames

Heated breath touching you
Feel the fire passing through
Leaves you hot leaves you this
Tasting only passions kiss

Marsha


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2002-02-28 12:41 PM


Oh wow, Marsha. I love the title, I love the poem, I love the drama!

Nan

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2 posted 2002-02-28 01:14 PM


BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!HOT!!!HOT....IT SIZZLES WITH PASSION... I LOVE IT, MUSHY....I LOVE IT...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-02-28 01:22 PM


Beautifully and sensually hot, Marsha...
Wow!!! I think I burned myself on this one.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-02-28 02:13 PM


uh huh.... do we need to call the fire department in?? Sounds like someone could get a blistered lip from such a kiss

Very nicely done Marsha.. nice drama, nice sensual excitement... I enjoyed!

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5 posted 2002-02-28 02:15 PM


enjoy your read
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6 posted 2002-02-28 02:20 PM


Aha...I thought this had something to do with a kiss...James
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7 posted 2002-02-28 02:21 PM


Marsha - yikes! This one's steamin'...liked it alot. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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8 posted 2002-02-28 03:14 PM




WOW!!! I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is very sensual, sweet friend, someone call the fire department! (giggles in delight) This is very passionately beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mushy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2002-02-28 03:18 PM


Wow!
My kinda poem
~*~
please call the firehouse
mushy has unleashed her love
and stoked passion's fire


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (02-28-2002 03:19 PM).]

ecrivan
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10 posted 2002-02-28 03:47 PM


warm in here isn't it...maybe to hot for my bllod pressure..hehe, good show Marsha


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11 posted 2002-02-28 04:02 PM


Marsha...

Wow girl, are you trying to burn
up the computers around here or what
;-) this is some majorily HOT stuff
and me likes it very much!! WOoooHooo
you got some passion going on here!
this is just amazing and I hung onto
every line! Take care and keep up the
great work sis! I love you....

Amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

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12 posted 2002-02-28 04:24 PM


Marsha...I see the full moon got to you too..
NICE WARRRRMMMMM poem....whewwwwww....

Suetang
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13 posted 2002-02-28 05:35 PM


Hello Marsha

The passion and heat in this sensual piece of writing nearly sent my computer screen into meltdown!  You weaved your words of love and desire so very well.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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14 posted 2002-02-28 06:51 PM


Oh Marsha, this is one of your best. I loved it. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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15 posted 2002-02-28 11:52 PM


Oooh Marsha, I like.  Very passionate write.

I think I am going to stick my tongue out over the stove and turn it on.  You know, the same one where the tea kettle has been for over two months now.lol

Dave

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16 posted 2002-02-28 11:57 PM


Mushy,
Oh great! Now we're sharing passionate poetry with our children. ROTFLMAO Okay...she's your daughter!

Silver Streak
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17 posted 2002-03-05 10:24 AM


O Marsha, darling girl, what have you done to me? As I streak through your heavens all I can think of is:

My skin has melted into gas
A fiery flame from Passion's lass
Sensual streams of hot red darts
Has blown the valves within my heart.

And now I yearn to burn in fire
Explode in lightning, your desire
A blaze of passion through the night
Two spirits, one, in white-hot light.

So darling open wide your soul
I'm on my way into your whole
There'll never be a hotter mass
Than vapor glowing from our blast.  

As you and I dissolve in smoke
Incendiary burning coke
Soaring beyond all heavens, far
Creating birth, a brand new star.

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeee! Your poetry just gets better and better and hotter and hotter
And I love it. And I love you, darling Mushy. xo

((Marsha))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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