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vandana
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0 posted 2002-02-28 11:14 AM



I have been
too lonely lately
Since we broke up,
The day since you left,
I have been too lonely,
lonely without you,
You left me alone
of a broken heart
The words were unspoken
Don't know you,
My tears are falling down
And my heart kept calling
your name
Iam here
All alone
Need you tonight
Thinking of the memories,
The rain kept falling
harder
each day and night
Since
I have been too lonely
Lonely
without saying the words
That were too late to say
All the day,
I keep looking outside
That brought me mmories
of you and I
That were meant to be
Maybe this was suppose to be
the way
for us,
Now Inside my heart,
Wanting you so
Dying to say these words
to you,
Wished I could tell you
How much It means to you
And now I have waited
too long
to understand why
Now Iam alone
And lonely without you
Wanting you so
Been lonely
Too lonely

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-02-28 11:17 AM


Vandana,
You got the point across. Enjoyed the read.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-02-28 12:05 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, I known these feelings of loneliness all too much for I have been lonely almost forever and now I know my dream girl but am lonely to meet her! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-02-28 12:30 PM


Hoping for good things to come your way vandana...we were not meant to be alone...James
Sven
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4 posted 2002-02-28 03:34 PM


and now. . . a look at the other side of it eh my friend??

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Magnus
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5 posted 2002-02-28 03:37 PM


Very well done Vandana...Can feel the loneli-
ness of this poem...

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