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Romeo
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0 posted 2002-02-28 09:08 AM




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Salvation


This is my life

This is my destiny

To live hopelessly

To be a distracted kingdom of melancholy


Yesterday, or present

Why shill they differ..?

even tomorrow won't be better

As sorrows compromise not to set me free

Nor sadness won't let me flee

This is my life

This is my fate

A journey in the middle of no where

A soul reaching decay's harbour

I'm a murky star

I'm a fading ember

Shill I have my redemption..?

or will I be the dusk of apprehension...?

This is my life

This is my gloomy fortune

Deception


Things can be reached

Others might be achieved

some , u may conquer to obtain

and some , there, waiting the sky to rain

happiness where thy shill I find......?

Tragidies are the eternal scene to grind

How can I foregt so easily...?

When thy heart vanishes the wounds extremely

Foolishness that is , if time wasted in hunting morganic phanotm

Stupidity if thou believed that prevalent joy would come

Farewell



Farewell rosy days

Farewell shiny skies

Farewell , moments of pleasure

Farewell soul,my love , my treasure

Unregretfull of times which passed

Unflinching of missdeeds I never did


Farewell


Yesterday, a sigh of lessions stroke

The golden sun disappeaerd without a word to speak

Listen to my unrest heart

when visions of the past tore it's veins apart

Feel the paralyised soul

praying that the healing drops of rain, would fall


Farewell


O' a descended night filled with agonies

Engraved by sharpend dagger as souvenirs

O' poor moon with no light

overtook since the severe silence crept

O' my world goodbye

A command of Heaven, though I must obey


Farewell

  


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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2002-02-28 11:01 AM


This is a most impressive and outstanding work. And I hope you are not really speaking of departing.
I feel the pain you write of here, I feel it every day.
Peace
Sandra

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2002-02-28 11:15 AM


ABSOLUTELY STUNNING....Romeo....you have too much to offer to say farewell...I have hope that you will find what you search for...in this world there is so much beauty ...so much love...do not give up on it....**big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-02-28 12:05 PM


Lots of talent shining forth here...James
Romeo
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since 2001-06-13
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4 posted 2002-03-01 03:30 AM




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SANDRA

I really wanan thank u so much regarding 2 ur sweet words about my sad Trilogy....

my dear firend ..it's a way to depart from the misiries I've been in so long...and I beg ur pardon about the pain I've made here which hurt u........I'm really so sorry

thanks 4 coming...it's been   a great honor 4 Romeo

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Romeo
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since 2001-06-13
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5 posted 2002-03-01 03:44 AM




STARTIME

life filled with love.. beauty...fabulous times......but it also has the other faces which no one can bare........so I pray God I only see the shining part from now & then....

thanks alot my dear friend 4 all what've u said about Romeo's humble words

take care

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James

how sweet of u 2 say that....I guess Romeo is only steping his 1st steps in such a field

thanks 4 visit
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