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Tardy Boy (Revised)
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Tardy Boy (Revised) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Will be late if you write a long one must shut my computer, throw in the sponge lessons must begin on time rush away, teach with no rhyme "teacher, why were you late"...students exclaim "I had an important date"...teacher replies, "not to abstain." "I'll be your truant scout had to get my morning quota out"! [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-28-2002 11:11 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ecrivan, A poem within a poem. Enjoyed |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Sorry, Class.. I would have been here on time... It was Passions - They did it - I was commenting on poems - couldn't leave... I'll be on time tomorrow, I PROMISE..!!!"  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Martin darling boy now this is one of your utter utter best, I love it. YOU have such a fabulous talent and in this your portray it to pure perfection   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Seymour, sometimes just getting an impulse can do wonders, thanks for sharing  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hey Nan, Most of my language kids all know of passions now, a place where they can read different writing styles and more  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hey Marsha, Sometimes I can't get over my own wit in a way. Glad I have it and can put it into productive use |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Those who say "Poetry is a dying art," have never been here. Hope you didn't get detention!!! Those seats (desks) are so small!!! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Amusemi, So why satisfy those cynical critics? They can go you know where...Thanks for appreciating this! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, I can never get tired of replying to all the wonderful poes here, uh oh, I think that's the bell ringing, better hurry on! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
May that same light shine on you too Noah  |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Martin - I don't know. If you are late again for your class you might have to sit in the corner with the infamous dunce cap on your head.lol Enjoyed. Dave |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
you mean my students are going to stick me in the corner?...I better rewrite this then! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Martin, We all have our priorities! LOL Fun write. |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Martin - Why not? What is good for the goose is good for the gander. Just because you are the teacher, doesn't mean you should be above the rules. We must set an example for our youth.lol Lord knows I am a poor example, so we are counting on you.lol Dave |
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Hopefloats Junior Member
since 2001-10-30
Posts 26NH |
Just FUN.....loved reading this!! The most wonderful thing about writing is exactly things like this..we never know what one will write next.... and we always appreciate a good read!!! Thanks for a smile!!!! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
welcome to passion hopefloats, glad you like my surprises,hope to read your stuff soon |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hi Larry, that's true and priorites always change too..hehe! |
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