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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2002-02-28 07:36 AM



I find you
in the corner of my mind
Lying helpless
just a thought in disguised
lost among so many
But you're there for a purpose
and your love stirs
a chain of emotions
as I love
as I cry
as I desire you
I vow to control you
but I fail
and you slip into me
more deeply
like a wild river of passion
through my veins
you give me life again
as I need
as I hold
as I have you
you escape from me
to silently await
your next chance to invade
love cannot reach you

[This message has been edited by walker (02-28-2002 07:37 AM).]

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Lia Fail
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since 2002-02-26
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1 posted 2002-02-28 08:00 AM


Wow!!! very nice. such a beautiful way with words.
Lia

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2 posted 2002-02-28 08:53 AM




(big hugggssssss) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to these lonely people so so much but I know deep down that love can reach them all as long as they have the strength to first love themselves and find a little hope! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend this is wonderfully touching! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-02-28 05:09 PM


Walker...nice...lightly passionate and very
heavy on LOVE...

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2002-02-28 05:24 PM


Beautifully written.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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