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Open Poetry #19

S for Sven ( challenge)

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

0 posted 2002-02-28 05:56 AM

S

Sporting several sagging salt sacks,
she, somewhat small, suddenly slipped,
spilling sodium,
still stumbling salvaging
Sven's seasonings spread.

~Alice~

[This message has been edited by Alicethruglass (02-28-2002 03:11 PM).]

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2002-02-28 03:42 PM

hmmmmmmmmm. . . still thinking about this one Alice. . . but, I like it. . .

well done. . .

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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2002-02-28 03:48 PM

Oh yeah, that reminds me, supposed to be doing one of these. Challenge well met!

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2002-02-28 03:57 PM

I like

Charisma

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-28 04:57 PM

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is wonderfully creative, sweet friend, I am always amazed by the wonderful words you write, wonderful job on the challenge, we're all so proud of you! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alice, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2002-02-28 05:16 PM

This is a great job on svens challenge.

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

6 posted 2002-02-28 05:36 PM

I hope you didn't think too long on it Sven..your seasonings would become a little stale *s

Glad I could remind you Duncan *s

Thank you for liking Charisma *s

I amaze myself sometimes * jk Noah, thank you

Smart Chick thank you for enjoying..it was fun and I did them all last night when I couldn't sleep *s

~A~

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