Making Her Smile ("L" Sven's Challenge)

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Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

0 posted 2002-02-28 12:02 PM

I have a headache now, but here is my challenge answer, Sven.

There is someone in particular this is directed towards. Suffice to say, I think he'll read it with a smile!

umm...did I do this right? Is it too long?

Lugrubrious lady lacks luster.
LISTEN!
Love letters liberate light!
Lovely little lady likes
lusciously loveable
lighthearted lummox.
Living levity lessons.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

[This message has been edited by Siofra (02-28-2002 12:05 AM).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-02-28 12:06 PM

COOL! you did great with this.....I think mine was too short LOL

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-02-28 09:51 AM

*s sure are tongue twisters aren't they?

M

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-02-28 03:41 PM

Now this is more like it!!

Great job Siofra. . . it didn't make your head hurt too much did it??

Just think, now you've added more words to your vocabulary, and that's a good thing!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2002-02-28 03:46 PM

pretty cool......L ove it....

Charisma

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-02-28 03:54 PM

I love this! Challenge well met!
Perhaps I'll get a letter and try!
~Hugs, Nancy~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-02-28 04:54 PM

YAY!!! I love it, I love it, this is fabulous! (kiss on cheek) This poem is both an outstanding reply to the challenge and has such a lovely upbeat message of hope and love! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Siofra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2002-02-28 05:07 PM

Well, you did this very good.

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

8 posted 2002-03-01 09:52 AM

I wonder who that someone could be?

I'm sure that he's happy.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-03-01 01:32 PM

Oh yes this is good. fun isn't it. great job. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

10 posted 2002-03-02 12:35 PM

Lovely luminescent letter.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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