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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-02-27 11:12 PM



Answer the call, it's for you
voices from the past, out of the blue
old classmate talked of distant past
pasted a new faces to memories, at last.

Answer the phone its for you
a ring, a welcome from the world, a zoo,
Wednesday plan for the weekend all in the air
Friday night hits and there is no one there.

For Saturday dates, people are already committed
on the horn, calls registered they admitted
where does the phone public get energy to tail,
track down its bait and hook them no fail?



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1 posted 2002-02-27 11:19 PM




(sigh) Wow, these are some really powerful thoughts, sweet friend, it too can be so very haunting how we can keep in touch through phone service even after so many years of lack of communication! (big huggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is indeed quite thought-provoking, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-02-27 11:27 PM


I see now how I gave this a haunting twist..that was a 'mistake' that proved interesting.Thanks my kind friend
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