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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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0 posted 2002-02-27 10:50 PM



Get Up Now


Get up now
and go outside
Do you see
whats in the sky
Is that the most
beautiful moon
Now come on
lets act like loons
I mean it
start yelling or howling
What ever you prefer
Pound on your chest
Who cares if the
neighbors are disturbed
Grab your lover
Give them the kiss of their life
Don't forget that lower lip
to bite
By Gosh we woke up today
who knows about the marrow
And this moon says it all
here today gone tomarrow


Connie McDonald
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1 posted 2002-02-27 10:56 PM


Connie - If I start howling at the moon right now, will you bail me out of jail when I am arrested for disturbing the peace?  I enjoyed this loony and moony write.

Dave

Lia Fail
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since 2002-02-26
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2 posted 2002-02-27 11:05 PM


zinsser,
this was a great piece. It gave me a chuckle,
I like its playful theeme.
Lia

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3 posted 2002-02-27 11:05 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...if only my Joanna was here with me, I would be howling all night with my love in loves first kiss with her! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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4 posted 2002-02-27 11:17 PM


But Connie do loons bite each others lip..I mean bill..maybe they do??anyway nice loony
moony write


Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
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5 posted 2002-02-27 11:48 PM


Thanks  : ) To ALLLLLLLL  Of You
I LOVE the moon...
and about biting.... well....   : )

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