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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-02-27 09:52 PM


Greet my smile from ear to ear
Take my hand, and join me here
Skip the ropes that hang you up
Drink the drops of loving cup

In the prone to see the blue
Snuggle up in passion's dew
Nuzzle of the morning rose
Wind swept hair and sandy toes

Spin the yarns of days before
Hide and seek upon the shore
Catch the fireflies now at dusk
Glistening oils and perfume musk

Worry not upon the beach
Dripped in juices pink and peach
Roll upon the grasses green
Count the stars of cresting scream

Greet my step and run with me
Find the trade winds light and free
Sing the songs and dance the beats
Nibbled ears and summer sweets

Join me in these escapades
Bubbles light upon the waves
Candle glow and fire gaze
Playing in romantic ways

Copyright Kkh 2/27/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2002-02-27 09:56 PM


Hello Kathleen

You have masterfully captured the pure essence of all things romantic and I applaud you for such exquisite writing.  I can't wait to read more of your work.

Take care........Sue

Suetang

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-02-27 09:56 PM



I like the sing
of this song
so sweet and it
just bounces along
so sing me a bit
then sing some more
while I sit here
upon your floor.

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2002-02-27 09:58 PM


I like this very much
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-02-27 10:02 PM


"Greet my step and run with me
Find the trade winds light and free
Sing the songs and dance the beats
Nibbled ears and summer sweets

Join me in these escapades
Bubbles light upon the waves
Candle glow and fire gaze
Playing in romantic ways"




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I love this so much, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always spark a flame of inspiration and tender love across these pages! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2002-02-27 10:57 PM


Sounds like the perfect day!  
Your poetry is such a pleasure to read.

Lia Fail
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since 2002-02-26
Posts 80

6 posted 2002-02-27 10:58 PM


I really enjoyed this one!!!
lia

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-02-27 11:11 PM


Greet my step and run with me
Find the trade winds light and free
Sing the songs and dance the beats
Nibbled ears and summer sweets

Join me in these escapades
Bubbles light upon the waves
Candle glow and fire gaze
Playing in romantic ways
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kathleen...If I had to choose two stanzas, these would be my favourite...but, then again...I love them all.  I especially love the way this piece mades me feel.  Happy!!
Thank you for this one!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
8 posted 2002-02-28 01:29 AM


ThisDiamond - like your writings, smooth, rhythmic, and flowing..

'Join me in these escapades
Bubbles light upon the waves
Candle glow and fire gaze
Playing in romantic ways'

I find this very romantic...

BC

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
9 posted 2002-02-28 08:57 AM


playing romantically..a favorite thing to do..especially in candlights glow
nice *s
M

Marsha
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10 posted 2002-02-28 09:06 AM


This Diamond darling. This simply soars with delight, wonderful writing darling utterly utterly wonderful. The flow and the rhythm in this is perfect well done you write excellently. Nothing is better than playing with delight and romance

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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