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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-02-27 09:29 PM


I want a man who understands
who's unafraid to take my hand
and walk with me on distant shore
to love with me forevermore.

I want a home for little girls
a haven safe, a better world
where no one ever would deny
these precious souls their smallest cry.

I want to go back into time
to days when love was not a crime
and hatred was not daily news
there was no need to sing the blues.

I want love to consume my life
not as it is, just constant strife.
Feel happiness flow all around
and pull myself up off the ground.

So Doctor Love, what is your cure?
Can you prescribe how to endure?

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (02-27-2002 09:30 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-27 09:35 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I LOVE IT, this is wonderful!!! (kiss on cheek) I am sure Doctor Love has the perfect advice for you, as I know that the joy of true love will come to your heart very soon too! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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with you
2 posted 2002-02-27 09:40 PM


Bravo!! Challenge well met!!

Shadowed_Innersense
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somewhere at the edge
3 posted 2002-02-27 09:45 PM


A time before singing the blues
that is a time in distant past
when nights were earned
and days thought to forever last

I would hope the Dr would suggest something in the lines of ....
"Take two Shadow's, search the Innersense and ... if you can .... call me in the morning."     *ss          xLotsx

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-02-27 09:47 PM


Yes Sandra, challenge well met!  I have a list for him...lol...don't know if I can write it all out.  Love this one!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Hopefloats
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since 2001-10-30
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5 posted 2002-02-28 08:23 PM


You KNOW you will someday friend...still writing such heartfelt words.(I know I need to get back to writing too!!!!)...Anyways Im here looking things over...maybe soon....Excellent write!!! Love Ya friend.. D
amusemi
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A State of Disarray
6 posted 2002-02-28 08:27 PM


Been there...not there now...thank goodness!!!


Silver Streak
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7 posted 2002-03-05 09:51 AM


Very beautifully written, Sandra.
((Sandra))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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