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Marge Tindal
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Far Away
~*Marge Tindal*~

Thoughts of you fall gently
as the sun upon my face
for still I'm held in mesmerize
at the thrill of your embrace~

Foreverly entwined
in the basking of your love
sent to bless my life
surely from the spirits above~

May I in soft-remember
always touch that place you dwell
in a corner of my heart
where love is in constant swell~

Upon a Sunday morning Magnolia blossom
I will inhale the fragrance of you again
No matter how far away you may be
You'll be back in my thoughts, my loving friend~


*For my sweetie in recall of a song he sang for me*
Thanks love~


*Thanks to a special un-named poetess
for lending me her daily quota of posts, as I exceeded mine~
Why ... I do believe that's a Suthern Magnolia~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-27-2002 08:54 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Gosh Marge....I guess it is very very obvious
that you are very very much in love...and
expressing it so well....
ctowen
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2 posted 02-27-2002 09:00 PM       View Profile for ctowen   Email ctowen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ctowen's Home Page   View IP for ctowen

Doesn't sound all that far away
when put in such a special way ...

Indeed a loving tribute.
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Somewhere in time~


3 posted 02-27-2002 09:16 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Marge this is beautiful!
Enjoyed this one so much tonight.
*love the note to suthern at the bottom*
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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4 posted 02-27-2002 09:19 PM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

Marge, this is such a beautiful poem. I so much enjoy reading what you write.
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Marge

You express your love so tenderly...he must also...
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6 posted 02-27-2002 09:29 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Margie girl sister of my heart this is simply exquisite, I love the flow of this darling girl it is so beautiful. YOU wear love so well darling heart it shines in each word your heart pens.

Wonderful darling heart utterly utterly wonderful and YOU really are soaring with your poems lately. You’ve always been good, actually you’ve always been pretty near perfect, but now you’re outstandingly superb. Beautiful darling heart sister really beautiful



Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

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with you


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so beautiful Marge
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Marge
This is so beautiful...thanks for sharing it with me...your love is so deep and tenderly expressed...I'm so happy for you!
Love ya
Cindi
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We've missed you Lady....I don't think anyone would mind if you borrowed a few unused posts from here and there...
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10 posted 02-27-2002 10:10 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Marge:  Very tender and lovely!  I hope you share these wonderful poems with him!

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal
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Magnus~
Awwwww !  I don't mind the 'obvious'
cause you are 'right-on' !
Thank you~

CTOwen~
It's a hop - skip - and a jump from 'far away' to his arms~
Thank you so much~

Enchantress~
Thanks gal~
Ummmmm .. Suthern WHO ?

SmartChick~
Thankee gal~
And ... I love seeing YOU here too !

Martie~
Oh .. sis .. he does in so many ways~
He's a keeper !

MarshaLove~
You're a doll !
AND .. I love the 'all' of you~

SEA~
Thank you sweet lady~
I love ya'

Cindi~
SO good to see you~
Thank you for the well-wishes~

Karilea~
I miss it when I'm not here,
but love being with him more~
So I think a little 'trade-off' from a friend was a great idea too !

BettyLou~
Ahhhhh, yes !
HE gets them FIRST~
Thanks gal .. love ya'
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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WOW!!! just beautiful!
Lia
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A poem as graceful and elegant as the maginolia blossom.  

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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across the land of dreams. In


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Far away yet so close..

Such a lovely touching write Marge....

Oh..how I miss your wonderful lines..

Thank you sweet friend
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Marge Tindal
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Lia~
Wow ... I'm so glad you think so~
Thank you very much~

Dan~
A nice thing to say ... I thank you muchly~

MyEnchantedMelody~
So good to see you gal~
Thank you for the sweet reply~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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16 posted 02-28-2002 09:57 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

suthern WHO?

ROFL... I often ask the same question... one of the trials of being blonde and getting old. LOL

This is absolutely lovely, lady... and so full of love. *S* For the pleasure of reading such beauty, I'd be willing to put masking tape over my "New Topic" button even if I had poems written and waiting!!! *G* But since my muse is hibernating and my poetic efforts become confetti in the trash can, there's no conflict... just the opportunity to read and enjoy. *S*

[This message has been edited by suthern (02-28-2002 09:59 AM).]

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liked it
Marge Tindal
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18 posted 02-28-2002 10:46 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

SweetSuthernWHO?~
You know I was referring to the Magnolia species !

Now - I slid your idea past a mod or two ...
and seems they thought it might be okay~
LOL ... well, not exactly the way it went down ... but shucks, what are they gonna do ... bleep us ?
Oh ... perish the thought !

You're a super trooper friend ...
NOW maybe MY turn to turn you on to some 'inspire', eh ?
I'll see what I can do~
Love you bunches and bunches~

Shucks .... I love ya' so much I used my quota of smilies just for you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Marge Tindal
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Whoops ... VanDana~
I missed your little smile in there~
Thanks gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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I'm glad the mods are being cooperative. *S* They're good people... and that's an understatement. *S* I'm rather fond of some of them... but don't tell 'em I said that. *G*

Of course, you do have my password... and heaven knows, I'm not using it to post poems. *G* But please make sure I get the baby poems. LOL I'm not sure I could handle the shock of seeing my name associated with a love poem... and Bill dern sure doesn't want THAT trade-off!!! LOLOLOLOLOL
Marge Tindal
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21 posted 02-28-2002 02:59 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

SuthernGal~
You just keep me in stitches ~
LOLing at you~
Nah ... I don't need to 'post under your name' ...
just thought I'd mention the appreciation of your sweet gesture~

And YEAH .. some of those Mods are kewl~

Now ... Bill 'might' not mind that at all~
He'd just have to love you as much as I do~
Love you gal~
*Hugs*
~*Me*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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What I wouldn't give to walk around barefooted in the Tindal mind

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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just out of reach


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in a corner of my heart
where love is in constant swell~

Marge - these few words tell a story of your love in themselves. Perfectly penned. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Marge Tindal
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24 posted 03-06-2002 12:33 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

InterLoper~
Tee-Hee ... now I've heard about those 'footprints on my heart' .. but not so sure my 'mind' has been barefooted .. YET !
Come on down~

NightShade~
Awwww ... thanks hon~
The heart pens what it holds within~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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