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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2002-02-27 06:03 PM


There is a shade which masks the light
and colors everything we see,
when seconds spent away from you
become a true eternity.

When not one single ray of hope
from dark skies will come shining through,
the scope of what I would describe
must surely be the color "blue".

Where once were laughs now flows a stream,
to chart the course of broken dreams
without a chance of coming true,
they merge into the color "blue".

Let poets write of their blue skies
of magic and of butterflies,
of love lost 'fore its' time was due,
their words can't break the spell of you.

A chorus echoed by the lines
musicians weave their notes into,
this hell I've come to know as mine
now has but just one color, "blue".

© Copyright 2002 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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1 posted 2002-02-27 06:08 PM


now this is GREAT....... I love it
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2 posted 2002-02-27 06:09 PM






(big hugggsssssss) So very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and the sorrow you feel! (sad sigh) May you reach up to the blue skies and find a silver lining and find sunshine shine in your heart again, sweet friend, we all love you so much, all our hearts go out to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet William, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada
3 posted 2002-02-27 06:17 PM


*sigh* I know this color and you have described it very well...I try to color it turquoise so that I do not feel the blue as much...turquoise is the color of my dreams....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Denise
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4 posted 2002-02-27 07:14 PM


You never disappoint, Doc! Fantastic expression!
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