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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-27 04:18 PM


oh beautiful day
morning after our dreaming
of our listening
learning from our emotions
deeply held feelings inside

Inspired by:A Simple Smile




Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (02-27-2002 04:39 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-27 04:22 PM




(smiles) Awwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I always find it so refreshing to embrace a new day after dreaming for I feel the sensation and comfort of hope and then awaken just knowing it can come true if I feel it! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a wonderful tanka! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Soleil Noir
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2 posted 2002-02-27 04:27 PM



E...nough of this
E...asy for you to say
E...moting all over...

[you wouldn't think this ExEmplifiEd your work now, would you?  Of course you would!]

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3 posted 2002-02-27 04:32 PM


_xactly what I would hav_ said oh Gr_at Voic_ of the Southland. . .

W_ll don_ Sir. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

1slick_lady
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4 posted 2002-02-27 04:33 PM


it was more than you
that had held me so closely
a touch not of skin

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2002-02-27 04:43 PM


Noah ~
Thank you my friend.

SN ~
I don't speak french.  Besides, I fixed it

Sven ~
Ok, I giv_ up!

Helen
I hold, tenderly,
all thoughts of you in my heart
letting them mingle

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marsha
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6 posted 2002-02-27 04:50 PM


Interloper darling boy This is one of your utter utter best poems darling boy, as always you write with utter wonder, your pen is dipped into magic dust I think  

Truly outstanding writing and I love it love it love it.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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7 posted 2002-02-27 05:01 PM


Perfectly wonderful!!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2002-02-27 05:14 PM


Marsha ~
Wow!  And Wow again!  Thank you, sweet lady

Enchantress ~
Between you and Marsha my head will be so swelled (swollen?) my stetson won't fit any more

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Startime
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9 posted 2002-02-27 05:40 PM


*sigh* I love the way you are so inspired to write such beautifully romantic poems...They are a true delight to read....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2002-02-27 05:51 PM


Startime ~
{sigh} I love the way you swell my head

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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11 posted 2002-02-27 06:53 PM


Interloper this is so nice. love it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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12 posted 2002-02-27 07:25 PM


Dreams, they can be so sweet.
I am unlike Noah, though, I hate to wake up.
Sandra

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13 posted 2002-02-28 10:59 AM


liked it
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