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Reflections Stirred
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Reflections Stirred |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
On sunlit dimpled flow We drifted Lazy summer day Passed letting currents guide As we, like lizards, warmed blood Long chilled by Drizzled greys. Hour shed clothes Piled in bottom of boat Each new revelation Pinking until anointed With oil No shame in naked thoughts Or hedonistic enjoyment We felt the river move Then moved the heavens Where they had been reflected |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat Nothing like floating with no shame and just the sun to blame. I am enjoying your poetry! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!!Absolutely magnificent...I love it...I love it...sensual and stirring....filled with the freedow of what love is about....**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Unfolding now are nakdthoughts shed beneath the gray of skies. Drifting, lazy comes the warmth as sun begins its peak of rise. We lay together 'til the fullness of the moon would share it's face No shame in ever sharing love above/beneath blue heavens grace. "C" can't resist when I see the naked thoughts before my eyes *s M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever move a piece of heaven deep into your heart and share true loves happiness forever! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is enchanting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh! I love this |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
We felt the river move Then moved the heavens It is like rolling thunder, a feeling we don't soon forget. So so nice! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this very much, Cpat. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
so smooth the sea in this view of time frozen in pleasure |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It would be nice to adopt your style of writing, but no one does it quite like you... stirred, not shaken... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cpat- Very well penned piece, my friend. I much enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Such a peaceful piece it is...  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Flows beautifully, Cpat! We felt the river move Then moved the heavens Where they had been reflected just like the river.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Sensual and soft images you've painted here....and so exquisitely as well. I loved the light, airy feel of this...beautiful work!  *Krista Knutson* |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A bright and noble write author... I really liked! ThisDiamond |
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