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The Music
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The Music |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind 
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The Music hear the music, words of yore wanting to dance, upon your shore sounds of laughter, sounds of sad stepping to beats, we never had singing songs, creating notes knowing our love will stay afloat hearts are making of the beat keeps going,going,moving our feet when playing together in harmony then it will sound like a symphony then the tune heard from that band will sound so great it will be grand  bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Looks like music in motion is in us all today here ... : ) Good write |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may we all hum a merry tuen of love in our hearts and spread smiles and harmony to all the world! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bernie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
enjoyed the flow and lightness of the poem. nicely done. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Connie, Thank you, yes music was in me that day, thought is was still playing. But...... Thanks Noah, you are so very kind with all your relplies Thanks Tim, thought this hit the road for the archives... Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Nice song Bernie...sweetly sang |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed the song Bernie! May I have the next dance? ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Thank you Paula, But as every song has its beat to set the heart in motion, soon or later the song will end to the final beat of the music waiting flowing notes keeping harmony Enchantress thank you for reading and yes i can open up the dance card for the next dance.. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Goes with my recent thoughts...beautiful. I think we need more of the "music of yore." (Or, tune, etc.) It's certainly more in tune with nature...less beepy and electronic, I guess! |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Okay, so that's "words" of yore... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
ok accordionmaid, how about both, music of yore and words of yore. Thanks for reading Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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