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Passion's Moon
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Passion's Moon |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Passion’s Moon The air is crisp and cold outside, the night is dark and clear Strong emotions will not subside, I blink a frozen tear My breath misting in freezing air, the sigh I can’t hold back A silver globe makes me aware of what it is I lack I gaze in wonder at the sight, so bright against the sky Desire, in me, it does ignite, with all that will imply The heat I feel starves off the cold, I’m lost within a dream Where arms will pull me close to mold and eyes that are agleam A burning that has reached it’s crest from a kiss made to swoon I need the thing for which I quest, the love from passion’s moon Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karen, I don't know if this will help,  but I tried. A lovely poem. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* oh yes..it helped very much...Thank you, dear man... Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ If the title says moon ... I'm drawn in~ This is mesmerizing~ AND SEA~ reminded me that I owe that LunaLady one~ I'll post in a minute or two~ Beautifully done, gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
you always write so beautifully Karen! Moons and stars always captivate me! (hugs) |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karen~ Ohhhh SIGH ever so romantic, very pulling all the lines....  peace....Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Don't ya just love the moon...... I just love it... you wrote of it's power well... : ) Thanks |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Karen hi there, I love the flow of this it’s absolutely perfect. Very well written the majesty and the power of lover’s moon, an excellent example of poetry in motion. Beautifully portrayed by a beautiful poetess Well done very well done   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Hi Karen, A little ray of sweet moonlight Came through a darkened pane one night Just searching for a maiden there A little answer to her prayer. An angel flew into her room Lodged deep into her sleeping womb A love so bright, night turned to day Two angels, loving, God's pure way. I love your poems, Karen. They are very beautiful.  ((Karen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Startime, ooh, this read like a song!! Loved it. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it......and I agree with Nightshade....it reads like a song, Beautiful!! Charisma |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sometimes Karen just stepping out and viewing the moon can make all the difference in my night..I enjoy your words hugss M |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh so romantic, Karen...I don't know why, but the moon inspires romance...  Very Beautiful! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
You do capture that passion so well and paint it here for us to enjoy...beautifully done! |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
You write of me well would that my arms enfold you let moonbeams instead Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I just love this Karen. "Where arms will pull me close to mold and eyes that are agleam" And I love the swoon, moon, lovely write. floria Floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Karen, SO DO I!! This is great, I always have mixed feelings with the full moon. I love it so much, and yet it somehow makes you feel the lack of love even more. Sandra |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Karen dearest friend, you "Passion's Moon" is perfect compliment to my "Passion's Star" We share the love and passion of the night sky Startime.....beautifully crafted poem !!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Karen, what is it about the moon and the poet? Looking at it tonight inspires me... thank you for this beautiful piece. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I agree with Nancy....you have inspired us to write our own Moon words.....Thank You Karen for a very beautiful and romantic poem.... |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Karen - The moon is sure all over the blue pages tonight. One thing you certainly don't lack is an ability to write fine poetry. Well done. Dave |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Karen - you write of passions moon, I write of an inspiration and called it, "Full Moon Tonight"... Romantic write as you do... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am not writing the moon this time but I sure love reading it, especially when it is so well done like this one is. Great job. ~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~ |
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