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Landas Luver
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since 2002-01-23
Posts 11


0 posted 2002-02-26 11:25 PM



Who will be there to comfort me
when I'm sick in bed
Crying alone and sad.

Who will be there to care for me
when I'm stuck with the flu
Landa know it will be you.

Who will be there when I am afraid
at night in my house
to here the crawling of a mouse.

Who will be there to hug me
when I need luv
from you as beutiful as a dove.

Who will be there to kiss my lips
to touch my hips
with there beautiful finger tips.

Who will be there is my question
it would be my baby girl Landa
yes my baby Landa.

Carlos Roman


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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2002-02-27 12:02 PM


Enjoyed this Carlos...James
Mystic Mystron
Member
since 2002-02-15
Posts 69
North York .Ontario
2 posted 2002-02-27 12:11 PM


Great poem keep up the good work

May the mystic waters flow to inspire you to write a poem

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2002-02-27 12:15 PM


This is so nicely done.
I have to tell you though,
it reminds me of the bumper sticker~

'be good to your children,
they pick your nursing home'  

amusemi
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
4 posted 2002-02-27 12:15 PM


A beautiful thought.
peaches73533
Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981
OK, USA
5 posted 2002-02-27 01:46 AM


Very nicely done.
Peaches

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